Title : Healer and A Demon King

Genre : Romance, Fantasy AU

Ship : KatsuDeku

Author : NekoSamaOfficial

Description : OMG, the last few sentences are pretty funny. 😂 I expect this book to be a romcom, and my guess is right! UwU

- Okay, so when describing a possessive noun, you MUST use the coma apostrophe. For example;

"The girl's emerald-coloured eyes..."

What to improve

- I like your writing style. Simple but great!

- I found less grammatical and spelling errors so awesome job! Your English is very good and I enjoy your story with your writing style.

- you don't have that many things to improve. Maybe just fix some spelling and grammatical errors here and there. :3

Plot : THE PLOT IS GREAT! I have never read/seen this Mage and a Demon Queen but it sounds cool and exciting! I love your plots and how you describe Izuku's personality! ❤

I'm adding this book to my library to wait for updates. 😜😙

Overall : You are fine. People who read your book will surely enjoy the story. You know, this one is kinda underrated because it is hard to find a BNHA romcom fantasy AU fanfic like this. UwU