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#Review 18

Title: Antagonism

Type: Shouto Todoroki X Reader

Genre: X Reader

Author: TheBlackenedOne

Title: Simple title full of mystery. Interesting. It has been a while since I read Todoroki X Reader (like, last time I read is a few months ago)

Description: I like simple description becuase it doesn't spoil the plot and storyline. And good job for giving the meaning of the word!


What to Improve

- First of all, I want to say congrats for not making too many grammatical and spelling errors! Throughout my reading, I rarely spot any error so I enjoy reading the story.

- Your writing style is neat and descriptive. I like your style! Totally different from mine. Yours is just... So descriptive that it keeps me reading!

- So aesthetic! Your book is aesthetically beautiful! Great job!

Plot: Your plot is progressing smoothly. I like the storyline, plot and plus your writing style add the thrill more.

Overall: To be honest, you are doing just fine. I don't notice error that often so that is amazing. Lessen the error, add the readers. (That's a saying from my friend)

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