Title: The Boogeyman Izuku Midoriya

Type: Horror AU

Author: XXDoubleHHXX

Title: I haven't watched the movie yet and I hope to watch it one day-- But anyway

Description: I have heard of Michael Myers before! I have no idea he was from this horror movie! Always,I got excited when I read it!

What to Improve

Wrong spelling there. Here should be hear. Like this;

He didn't want to hear this but for some reason he just kept listening.

When writing a thought, use a different font. Such as;

'Why would she say that or even think something like that? Mothers are supposed to love their sons no matter what and not wish they didn't have them...'

Also, use a suitable punctuation mark to express more of a character's feelings and emotion.

For the voices in the head, like the thoughts, use different fonts and use quotation mark.

"Grab the big knife from drawer in the kitchen."

If you are going to start a new dialogue, make sure to begin a new paragraph to avoid confusion while reading.

And "i"should be in capital letter form.

- I noticed you tended to use long sentence and paragraph. I recommended you to use much shorter but full of details sentence. also, the paragraph. Don't make it too long and put space between new paragraph.

- Your story's plot is awesome! (๑°ㅁ°๑)‼

- You have no problem with grammars and have just a little spelling errors.

Overall, good job with your book! Just need a little fix here and there! :)