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#Review 13

Title: "I DON'T WANT TO BE YOUR BEST FRIEND!!!"

Type: BakuDeku, Fem!Deku AU

Author: scarletheartcrimson

Title: I got a feeling this is gonna be an angst story--

Description: Taking parts of the story and make it into a description is a good idea! I use this kind of concept to sometime. ^~^

*chokes on my hot cocoa* Kacchan is worried--

Awwww~ Soft Kacchan~

*wheeze* Kacchan blushes--

*rest my chin against my palm while sniffing* I smell the romance there...

*eyes wide* WOW KACCHAN TOLD HER SHE CAN BE A HERO!

NO, PLEASE! NOT NOW--

*le cries my heart out*

What to Improve

-I don't really know what you have to improve.

-No grammatical/spelling errors.

- You're very descriptive, like OH MY GOD. I love your writing style so much!

- Your story's plot is really, really amazing! It is awesome that you can easily make angst story (Which I failed miserably at--) I just hope the two end up together in the ending. :')

Overall: YOU ARE AMAZING.

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