#Review 13
Title: "I DON'T WANT TO BE YOUR BEST FRIEND!!!"
Type: BakuDeku, Fem!Deku AU
Author: scarletheartcrimson
Title: I got a feeling this is gonna be an angst story--
Description: Taking parts of the story and make it into a description is a good idea! I use this kind of concept to sometime. ^~^
*chokes on my hot cocoa* Kacchan is worried--
Awwww~ Soft Kacchan~
*wheeze* Kacchan blushes--
*rest my chin against my palm while sniffing* I smell the romance there...
*eyes wide* WOW KACCHAN TOLD HER SHE CAN BE A HERO!
NO, PLEASE! NOT NOW--
*le cries my heart out*
What to Improve
-I don't really know what you have to improve.
-No grammatical/spelling errors.
- You're very descriptive, like OH MY GOD. I love your writing style so much!
- Your story's plot is really, really amazing! It is awesome that you can easily make angst story (Which I failed miserably at--) I just hope the two end up together in the ending. :')
Overall: YOU ARE AMAZING.
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