Title: I Swear On My Grave (Bakugou X Reader)

AU: Yandere!Bakugou AU/ Mafia AU

Author: SUmmERklAP

Title: Really match the dark theme! Good job!

Description: I'm not really an expert when it comes to Yandere, but when I read the description, it is enough to make me jump in excitement even before reading it. Your description is enough to tell the story is gonna be very thrilling. Great work!

Warning: Thank you so much for putting the warning there! Some authors don't even give a care about warning. I really appreciate your consideration of warning the readers about the content.

What to Improve

*read the first sentence* my mood everyday--

- This book has a good beginning. ^^

- Your writing is very descriptive! It is amazing you can write it descriptively. I totally enjoy reading it!

- So, when it comes to the  person talking on phone, I advise you to use this font instead to make it easier for the reader to reas your story. For example:

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Example

She walked over to the phone and answered it. "Hello?" She spoke up. "Hey, (Y/N)! Wanna go on a date with me today?" He chimed on the phone, happiness evident in his masculine voice.

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(Oh Katsuki---)

- Plot is not too rushing, that is what we want! Bakugou's Yandere side is slowly growing stronger as the story progress. You give the hints the way the readers (like me) want.

- I don't find any grammatical error or spelling mistake yet when I read your book. That is really good of you because some readers are sensitive to these mistakes.

(I do spelling mistakes a lot thanks to my fast typing. I'm proud of you for not having too many mistakes or errors in your story. 👏)

- Overall, I can say, your writing style is great, the plot is awesome and doesn't escalate too fast, even the romance between the reader and Bakugou. (Do we actually call it romance when it comes to  a psychopath trying to win the love of his "crush"? XD)

- I think that's it. I hope this will help you. ^^