Title: I TRIED, OKAY?
Author: EijiroKiriBro

Title: Simple yet people could tell it is gonna be a dark story so I guess it is okay.

Description: Full of suspense. I was really curious when I read it. I really wanna know what actually happen to him. I could say this description is great!

What to Improve

- So, character's name spelling mistake there. It should be Uraraka, not Ururaka. I hope you fix it.

- This is not how you call a teacher. Uraraka should call him Mr.Aizawa.

- Each chapter is very short. Try to make it longer at least over 500 words.

- There are some grammar and spelling errors. But readers still can read and understand the sentence so no biggie worry. Just fix them, okay? ^^

- Put space between paragraphs.

- Ths story is confusing at first but as it progressed, I started to understand the plot and Midoriya's backstory.

- Plot is not very rush but also not too slow. Good work

- Do not make too many changes of POV. Some readers are sensitive to this.

- When you are writing dialogue, please mention who is talking. For example:

"I didn't know what to do." Uraraka sobbed. "Don't worry, we will help you." said Mr.Aizawa calmly.

- When writing a character's thoughts, please use this "font". For example:

_____________

Uraraka's POV

Why... How can this happen to him...? If only I notice soon..

_____________

It is to help readers understand better. Using this "font" will get the thoughts and story mix up. Readers can be confused.

- Your writing style is good. Sometimes descriptive. I enjoy reading it.

- Overall, it is okay. Just don't rush the plot because it can affect the story. The story is quite interesting. Keep it up!