🏆 Results: Ending
Announcing the results for category 'Ending'!
Gratitude to the participants and judges for joining this journey. At the end of the day, whether you win or not, your story is unique and you're on a path to hone skills and shine even brighter. Take the criticism positively and turn it in your favor.
POINTERS:
1: Emotions evoked : 10 marks
Upon reading the last two chapters, what kind of emotions could be felt? Do they feel forced, or does the sequence feel natural even without reading the main plot?
2: Sense of resolution: 10 marks
Does the story truly feel to have concluded or is there a sense of impending loopholes or missing / skipped instances?
3: Technicality: 10 marks
Analyze the structure, writing style, and grammar under this point.
4: Intrigue: 10 marks
Upon reading the conclusion, on a scale of 10, how intrigued do you feel to read the whole story from the beginning?
5: Uniqueness: 10 marks
Is the ending cliche, or does it feel new or unique?
J U D G E:
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•• Winning entry: https://www.wattpad.com/story/340278180
aurora_2604: Romantic story
Emotions evoked: 9
Resolution: 9
Technicality:8
Intrigue: 8
Uniqueness: 9
Overall score: 43
Strength: The story is unique and refreshing! The fluff ending is cute, I love it! And it's unexpected though, knowing a man can get pregnant, especially the bottom one! But yet about Hoseok letting go of Taehyung is just so sad, kind of making me want to cry.
What can be improved: But yet, also, honestly I am kind of confused about whether Taehyung can get pregnant and already had a son in the epilogue, like what? He's a guy, so how come? Can the author enlighten me maybe?
Winning sticker & certificate:
Congratulations! Keep shining.
Participant sticker for all:
Here is the list of other entries and brief reviews.
•• Entry 1: https://www.wattpad.com/story/197464730
NxnsxgnorsDxmon: Possible second chances
Emotions evoked: 8
Resolution: 8
Technicality:8
Intrigue:7
Uniqueness: 9
Overall score: 40
Strength: The plot twist ending, it's an angst that will make some readers who love the fluff drop their jaws!
What can be improved: Probably if the author has an idea/wants to make the fluff trope, why not?
•• Entry 2: https://www.wattpad.com/story/344473383
jiya-over-here: Chai Tea?
Emotions evoked: 7
Resolution: 7
Technicality: 7
Intrigue:7
Uniqueness: 8
Overall score: 36
Strength: The story is unique, kind of reminds me of Spiderman, and possibly think or imagine it's like a reboot story!
What can be improved: The typo on chapter 21 where it "You dount it?" should be "You found it." and any other typos that I've found could be worked upon. Also, the epilogue somehow is confusing me like what? Is that all? But then I saw the sequel below the chapter, so, yes, please I need a proper explanation in the sequel! Thank you!
•• Entry 3:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/235033899
munsen12: Love with a stranger
Emotions evoked:7
Resolution:7
Technicality:6
Intrigue:6
Uniqueness:7
Overall score: 33
Strength: The happy ending between the main characters is so good.
What can be improved: The sudden change of language from English to Hindi is confusing me. So, I think it should have such translations/notes below in the last paragraph of chapters.
Good luck to everyone!
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