(Third person POV)
Hakai and Adam went at each other in full force dodging attacks and clashing weapons making powerful air currents.

Hakai: Hay you improved, but that doesn't mean that I'll still kill you!
(Trying out different was of how the characters are going to talk.)
Adam: Hump not bad yourself to!

They both kept slashing, blocking, parrying, and dodging attacks. Hakai then pushed Adam back to get some distance to fire a Cero, Adam retaliated by using a B.O.D.
*booom*
The Cero and B.O.D hit it made a massive explosion that blew Hakai and Adam back.

Adam: Whew that was close.

Hakai appeared behind Adam then slashing him in the back.

Adam: Gaaahhh!

Saki: Adam!

Hakai: That's an impressive move, it countered my cero.

Adam: Grrr!

Adam then slashed Hakai in the chest but he shrugged it off like it was nothing.

Hakai: It'll take more than that pathetic slash to take me down!

Adam: Raaaaahhhhh!

Adam then charged at Hakai giving him no time to prepare himself. Adam kept on slashing to keep up the pressure. Hakai sonído behind Adam and tried to stab Adam but he blocked it with his knife.

Adam: Got to do better than that!

Adam pushed Hakai off of him then fired a B.O.D. Hakai dodged the attack but then found himself kicked in the back. Then Adam and Hakai clashed again and again and again.

Hakai: This fight has gone on long enough.

Hakai then proceeded to pull his hand up to charge a cero. But this was different. The cero color changed from red to blue.

Saki: No way that's a-

Hakai: Gran Rey Cero!

All of a sudden Adam was blasted back by the cero with it nearly killing him. He was lying in a giant crater half dead with his clothing torn up.

Hakai: Hahaha! Wow I can't believe your still alive. If your wondering what kind of cero that was, it's a special cero that the Espada can only use but as for me, I'm a special case. Now it's time to finish you off you little shit!

Adam was on the ground bleeding and clinging onto life. Hakai was charging another cero.

Saki: Adam no! You must not give up now.

Hakai: He's done for.

At that moment Hakai fired the cero which hit Adam but at the same time the cero was reflected in another direction. Adam stood up and his appearance changed again. His eyes glowed brighter than before, his hair was longer, the lines on his face turned yellow, and his outfit changed to. He was wearing a black outfit similar to Uryuu but he wore a jacket and his pants were now longer.

Hakai: What the! Not again!

Adam was behind Hakai without Hakai even nothing him. Adam then punched Hakai to the ground.

Hakai: Oh no way I'm letting this happen again.

Hakai pulled out his zanpakuto.

Hakai: Alright! Now destroy Kuroi ryū!

(End if part one)
Alright so what do you think of the new speaking thing I did. Now if you want me to keep it then say-

Oi (or yes)

If you don't then say

Nine (or no)

Anyway I hope you enjoyed this chapter and will be excited to read the next one.