I can't take it anymore,

My mind is out of control,

I'm spiralling into an empty pit ,

And all I can see is darkness,

" There should be light ", I tell myself,

And strain my eyes looking for it,

But my eyes close at their own accord,

Oh, Help me God.

"You have to stop ", I tell myself,

"No one would like this" , I whisper,

Then I remember I'm all alone,

And my body starts to shut down,

Oh,Help me God.

I dream of the sun and the stars,

The grassy meadows and the blooming flowers ,

And my conscience reminds me,

" It's nothing but a dream",

And I re - enter the tunnel of darkness,

And it's Tartarus all over again.

I look at myself and find nothing,

And I realise I'm living it all over again.

I try to fight, I really do,

Try to make myself smile,

But I can no longer feel myself,

Oh , Help me God.

So I give in to their demands,

I realise I'm no longer there,

For that was the time Elpis escaped ,

All my hope was lost,

And I smile to myself despite the darkness,

I stare at the stars and thank God,

My fate was sealed that night,

At least I didn't go down without a fight.

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This one needs editing too but I think I like this one better than the first one. What do you think?

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