Username: Egwuji
Title: The undivulged son
Reviewer: ebrus999

Title(4/5)

To be honest when I read the title it didn't give me much of a dive in vibe.

Cover(5/5)

I love the cover, it's both captivating and eye-catching and it says a lot about the story.

Blurb(7/10)

The blurbs does justice to the story but it lacks the thrill and excitement that the book truly contains. It lacks the "what's next?" Effect.

Character development (12/15)

You successfully painted a mental picture for the readers and did an amazing job with the way emotions are portrayed.

FYI favorite character Ian!!

Plot and flow of the story(14/15)

The plot is unique and very creative. The plot twists are amazing and picks readers attention.

Creative and writing style (15/15)

I really like your writing style. The descriptive words used in this story helps me to relate both to the plot and characters and it's very intriguing.

Vocabulary(8/10)

They are a few repetitive words used. But the words are quite exclusive if I may say and they do the job of painting a better picture for the readers.

Grammar and spelling (6/10)

A few grammar mistakes were spotted and I advice those be corrected as they crash the whole reading experience.

Interaction to readers (1/5)

A few of the comments were replied to. There was no authors note of appreciation so communication with readers was not established.

Overall enjoyment (10/10)

To be honest I didn't realize when I read to the last chapter of this story!
Nice job.

Total score: 82/100
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Thanks, Hope this review helps!!

Ebrus999💕