HOTHEADED
hazardouzayn

TITLE: 9/10! I like it a lot. It's a reference to Stef's personality, so I'm glad that it's relevant to the story.
COVER: 4/10! There's a lot happening on your cover and it's not that pleasing to look at. If you maybe limit yourself to only one effect and added some color it would look better. (And personally I like covers that have the faceclaim instead of the love interest!)
FACE CLAIM(S): 9/10! Abby is cute, and I've personally never seen her used before so it's refreshing to see a new face!
SUMMARY: 7/10! It's short and simple but it gets right to the point.
STORYLINE: 4/10! There's a few things that really bug me! The first thing is that the story moves really fast. One moment Stef's with Bev, and then shes with the losers, and then she's suddenly with the Bower's gang? Then Stef encounters Pennywise and is terrified and then she's suddenly totally fine like ten minutes later when she's at the pharmacy? All in the span of like three pages. It's a compelling plot, and I think your story could be really good if you just spent more time writing out scenes and adding detail instead of rushing through the movie. And it seems like Stan and Eddie barely exist in this story. They barely spoke the first three chapters and Stef doesn't even acknowledge them most of the time. Another thing, I'm really confused by is Stef and her dad? What's the story behind him? All I got from the story is that he left suddenly and Stef seems unbothered by it. And what's the story behind her claustrophobia? There's just a lot unexplained and it would be nice if you expanded more.
OVERALL: 33/50!