Hello Dark here, sorry for no updates for about a couple weeks. This is not really what I had planned when starting this 'project'. Over these past few weeks a lot in my personal life that made it really hard for me to want to update. A good friend of mine was hospitalized after being brutally injured with a weapon (They're fine now), I've started moving homes, Important school testing came up (FYI I'm between 16-25, just for safety reasons), and my mental health just didn't let me continue writing, not physically at least. Over the past couple weeks I've day dreamt a lot and come up with a ton of ideas but never had the energy to write them out.

Today as of writing this is my final day in my current house before I go an finish my final test needed, afterwards I will do some stuff in my house as I'm still moving. After all of it's done I will try and come back to writing.

As for my book I had a couple of questions.

1. How's this story and writing style so far.

2. Do you prefer in-text dialogue as I've been doing or spaced out dialogue.

Character A: "Hello" He stretches his hand out to the man standing in front of him.

Character B: "Well hello there", the man takes his hand shaking it firmly.

I have intention to slowly change my writing style as I go but I also want you the readers to like the writing style and not have it feel all weird to read.

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Well that's about all I had to say, thanks for continuing to read my book and I hope you enjoy and continue to do so.

BYE!