Title: Because I Love You
Author: Aaron_Ledgers
What is 'Because I Love You'?
          - It is a story following the genres of mystery, suspense and fantasy but also a slowburning romance. 

Rating -
     9/10

EBI:
- Don't be afraid to make some sentences more precise and cut straight to the point
- Sometimes the story can feel quite heavy and intense, it's good that it has this kind of influence on the reader but sometimes there just feels like there could be a little moment or something where the atmosphere feels a little more hopeful or happy, just to give the reader a moment to breathe - but this is just a suggestion
- The descriptions are good but sometimes take quite long to build, so you could, if you wanted to, work on imagery and what words really spark emotion and vivid details  into the reader

Review:
'Because I Love You' is definitely an acquired taste. The plot is completely, refreshingly, unique and seriously follows its own path. The descriptions, concepts and settings are really clear and effectively push the reader out of their comfort zone, whilst also involving them in a complex plot so intricately and thoughtfully developed. This story might not be for everyone due to its heavy feature of suicide, the afterlife and fantasy, but for those this story shines out to - it will really hit home. The language and writing style is easy to follow along and almost homely, with good sized chapters and plenty of them to prove that this story really is in for the long-haul. The grammar and tenses seem satisfyingly consistent, with gorgeous cliffhangers and catching starting sentences to shake everything up when it needs it most. It's really clear to tell, straight away, if this story could be for you, so I recommend reading the blurb and maybe even watching the trailer, and if it piques your interest or appeals, it's definitely your next Wattpad love.

Blurb:

Phil Heseroph wasn't exactly the best at being the boy-next-door. Grumpy, clumsy, and highly insecure with his life as a whole - he was the complete opposite of his girlfriend, a bubbly nerd named Ella. But like Yin and Yang, the two of them were inseparable...at least, until the day Ella died.

Blinded by grief, Phil took his own life.

However, instead of finding his much expected peace in the afterlife, Phil somehow awakens in a parallel world called Atlas as a different and almost monstrous-looking version of himself.

Trapped in the kingdom of Aerika, a bizarre place chock full of things like magic, elves, orcs, demons, faeries, squirrel-riding women, assassins, a tyrannical hierarchy, and everything else under the sun, he finds himself very confused and depressed. But before he can begin to make sense of anything, he's captured and caged like an animal by a ruthless girl who looks and sounds exactly like his late girlfriend.

Is this his own, personal hell?

Or is it a second chance?

And if it is a second chance...does he even want to take it?

Recommended?
     If you can get past the heavy features of death and a few other bumps along the way, and find this blurb/trailer sounding idyllic and captivating, then absolutely, you'll love it.

Trailer is attached to this chapter!

(Guys if you have a video or photo you want me to use, you're always welcome to let me know so that I can attach it to your review!)

Link:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/66014676-because-i-love-you-wattys-2017
as provided by author

Happy reading lovelies <3