A u t h o r: Chray00
P a c k a g e: something meaty.
G e n r e: werewolf.
T i t l e: the golden Luna.

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➺C o v e r: I love your cover, it's so pretty and the little details on it makes it unique. Your cover is perfect for your book.

➺S y n o p s i s: your synopsis is quite nice but it's short, I would have liked a bit more description about more characters, well especially the two main characters of the book but you only wrote an tiny bit about Lilly.

➺P u n c t u a t i o n & g r a m m a r: your punctuation and grammar is nice, I really don't have anything to complain about.

➺P l o t: totally amazing, your plot is new to me, I've never read or heard about a moon God and that's pretty cool, I was happy to learn something new.

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➻Side note: your book is nice! It's interesting, I still can't get over the whole moon God thing, I was already drawn to your book

when writing long paragraphs, I think it would be neater if you leave a line or two to make everything better, and also reduce the side of the lines of your paragraph, you shouldn't have more than 7 lines.

Example: "you need to pay attention Sarah!" I yelled at my best friend, she hasn't been listening to me at all.
"Well, it's not my fault that this cute guy has nice abs." As soon as she said abs, I immediately forgot whatever I was saying and sprinted next to her.
"Show me, show me!"

As you can see, I haven't left any space, so this is much neater: "You need to pay attention Sarah!" I yelled at my best friend, she hasn't been listening to me at all.

"Well, it's not my fault that this cute guy has nice abs." As soon as she said abs, I immediately forgot whatever I was saying and sprinted next to her.

"Show me, show me!"

Overall your book is great!