A u t h o r:   rhiannonfaithg
P a c k a g e:       Hawaiian.
G e n r e:     werewolf.
T i t l e:   Messed up fate.

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➺C o v e r: simply outstanding. I really love your cover, it's gorgeous, the font matches with the photo, it doesn't seem rushed or messy.

➺S y n o p s i s: your synopsis tells a lot about the story, it was described well and made me want to peek into your book, I was glad that you explained what I should expect in your book.

➺P u n c t u a t i o n & g r a m m a r: you need to work on your punctuation and grammar, it's quite confusing when you don't use punctuation properly.

➺P l o t: your plot is simple, it's nice but not extra nice, because I've read tons of book with the same plot, but I like your book differs from the rest.

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➻Side note: your book is really interesting, there's nothing new [ not meant to be rude ], because I have read a similar book, but you did an amazing job. I just wish you could work on your punctuation and grammar, I'm reading a lot of sentences that need a bit of touch, examples from your book:

I dunno. [ Avoid using informal words ].
Also, in chapter one, you wrote: the school was a bore as usual.
I personally feel that it should have been: school was as boring as usual.

You need to crosscheck your work before publishing, take your time and don't rush. You can't write a werewolf book like its a diary [ not like it's written like a dairy entry ], but you are writing like she is talking to us readers and she shouldn't be, I'm trying not to be offensive but if I had to rate your book out of ten, I'd give you a six.

When writing what someone says with quotation marks, you shouldn't squash them together leave a space, for example:

Correct:

"Beatrice is so annoying!" Jay groaned, as he changed his shirt.

Sean shook his head and laughed. "Yes, but we love her."

Wrong:

"Beatrice is so annoying bro!" "Yes, but we love her."

Overall, you tried your best, your cover was made well and your characters flow well with your book and your title works perfectly with the book, lastly, I feel you should describe more, you aren't giving enough description, I can't connect with your characters well enough.

I hope I helped, and wasn't rude.