A u t h o r:      cool_reader_
P a c k a g e:       Hawaiian.
G e n r e:            Fantasy.
T i t l e:    The witch's curse.

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➺C o v e r: your cover is quite interesting, it fits well with the book, it has an eerie feel which is perfect with your book.

➺S y n o p s i s: the synopsis wasn't very descriptive, it felt somehow like a poem, and I didn't feel the pull to read the book, I would have preferred more information about the actual book.

➺P u n c t u a t i o n & g r a m m a r: I really don't have much complain about, but I feel you should use other punctuations, try using more comma's and less full stops, [ that doesn't mean, you shouldn't use a full stop then you're supposed to ]. In general you need to use proper punctuation.

➺P l o t: great plot, I like how the story starts off, your book is really interesting, I like how you write!

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➻Side note: you should write longer sentences,eg: pizza is life. I'm hungry.

When you write really short sentences it makes your paragraph look weird, use commas to join your short sentences. There was this part in chapter 1 where I felt something was wrong: "where are you running? Huh? You can't run from me and you know that."

I personally think it should be: "where are you running to?"

Another punctuation problem: "will you help me?", I asked her.

NEVER. Never put a comma after a question mark, and especially outside your quotation mark. This is what should have been written: "will you help me?" I asked her.

Overall, I like you book, it's different in its own way, you described everything well and you characters are interesting, even though I didn't feel connected with your characters, just try to work in your punctuation.