A u t h o r:           beth_lynn
P a c k a g e:        Hawaiian.
G e n r e:            Vampire.
T i t l e:     Glacier.

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➺C o v e r: neatly done, for your genre I think your cover fits really well the flames make it look very enticing, I loved it.

➺S y n o p s i s: perfection, I like how you described your book, that's exactly what I like. When you describe well, it makes your reader understand what the books is about.

➺P u n c t u a t i o n & g r a m m a r: nicely done, I have only one problem with your punctuation and that's the use of full stops, when it's not needed, you need to crosscheck before publishing.

➺P l o t: great plot, I've read something like this before, and yours is  pretty nice I didn't expect to like anything, but your characters fit really well, and nothing felt fake/ forced.

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➻Side note: try reading out loud, so that you use the correct words, eg: "where are you?" Sean said.

That's wrong, because Sean is asking a question, he isn't just saying it he is asking. And try not to use a lot of said, and replied, it gets boring when you repeat. You should also remember to use capital letter when beginning a new sentence, even when you're writing a dialogue.

Apart from those small errors, I like your book your characters are quite interesting, I can tell Luke will have a big part in the book. You are very talented so keep up the good work.