"oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my god! are you ok!" Chidedpaw awoke the next morning. she was still lying next to hehepaw, but they weren't at the border, they were in BLOODCLAN camp. AHHHH. she screamed.

"silence! child!" hisses bloodystar. (a/n i meant tenses lol)

"why're my here!" (great english) Chidedpaw asked politely.

"idk. we found you sleeping with hehepaw, and for that......!!" bloodystar looked at hehepaw who was cowering in fear of what would happen. "imma let Chidedpaw go, she can't do anything, she's a apprentice."

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. i'll go now. (a/n, she is talking here fyi) and sped off, running faster than light and ending up in her camp, sleeping.

"oh your awake." spotpaw approach her.

"we're going hunting and battle training today, and then swimming." bobbytail said, his brown tail moving onto her shoulder for no reason.

Chidedpaw flashed her brown and pink pelt. they went hunting.

"ok so let's try sneak—" starystar said but got interrupted as Chidedpaw flew past him.

she snapped the neck of the shrew. but immediately the pile grew larger. because she had caught 30 SHREW WTF.

"oh how are you so AMAZING Chidedpaw!!?? your warrior ceremony is gon' be in a few days, trust me. but your sister and brother, they no getting their names, they BAAAAD. he mews quietly so Chidedpaw brother and sisters can't hear.

"let's keep going, we come back for this." starystar said and they went to train battle skilllll.

"and do a five roll and then jump on my back." bobbytail said, his brown bobby-tail lol flicking in circles.

"ok!!" everyone mewed together.

so as she was told, Chidedpaw jumped onto starystar, slipped underneath him, did some random rolly poly thingy and jumped onto his back. to no ones surprise, she'd done it first. obviously. everyone cheered and screamed for her. she is amazing.

*camp*

"go give it to the elders—oh wait they're no elders. give it to medicineleaf and then you can eat 4 shrews for yourselfs!!" starystar cheered. she did that, scoffing a shrew down, she went to the med den. she had forgot what she was there for. she didn't realise she needed to give her medicine cat a shrew. she'd aten the shrew. oops. now she got 5 tho so that was okay.

"did you give it to medicineleaf?" starystar frownedda.

"yeah, i did." she lied.

LIES LIES LIESSSSSS.

"nup."

"that's ok, you can just give this to her. bye for now lovely apprentice." she padded away to the medicine den and gave it to medicineleaf. sloppycoo and rattlehiss (both male!!) we're sharing tongues with each other. it looked yuck. saliva kept dripping off each other's pelts. Rewew. she sat down and someone started to lock her. it was zoofire, the medicine cat apprentice. wo