dedicating time (part 1)
Neil : arey yaar please try to understand i only love u , only u , y dont u get that
juhi : really ? then y were u admiring her ?
neil : i was not admiring her , i was just
juhi : shut up , again dont try to fool me , i know , all the guys are same , men will be men , what do u want more ? i have already given my everything to u right ? what more do you want ? (crying holding his collars)
avni sees them and stands there still controlling her tears
juhi pulls neil more closer to her by his shirt collar
neil : plse baby u r misunderstanding me
juhi : u dont baby me , go , go to her , never come to me again
neil : baby please , u really think that low of me , i love u baby
juhi : really ? do u really love me ?(wiping her tears looking at him innocently)
avni pov : look how innocent she is acting (fuming in anger)
neil (smiling and caressing juhi's cheek) : yes baby , i love u
juhi smiles and hugs him and he too hugs her back
juhi : love u too baby
saying this she kisses his cheeks making him and avni shocked but he smiles at her and hugs her again
avni leaves from there crying , neil observes this and feels guilty
juhi : come baby let us go to our room
Neil : ok chalo
here avni rushes towards her car and goes to her home
avni : i hate u neil , i hate u
she falls asleep due to tiredness
director : cut cut , what is this neil ? where is ur concentration ?
neil : sorry sir , we will do this bit again
juhi : no i think we have to do it from the start , we didnt romance properly
neil (angrily ) : no need to do it from the start , only from this bit is enough
director : yes miss juhi no need to do it from the start , anyway this short film is only for orphanage purpose , so it need not be more romantic
neil : exactly
juhi : i thought the impact will be awesome , sooo....
neil : no yaar , u know na avni is very possessive, now she will be mad at me
juhi gets angry but controls her anger faking a smile
juhi : chill na neil , she wont do anything , she should understand this neil
neil sighs and nods his head
They complete there shooting and neil leaves to his home
he directly goes into his room and sees her sleeping
he kisses her cheeks affectionately and keeps on looking at her , admiring her features
not able to control he kisses her lips making her awake
she pushes him lightly and glares at him
avni : first go and wash ur face
neil laughs out loudly
neil(pinching her cheeks) : my cutie wifey (he kisses her cheeks)
avni : neil go now (she says sternly)
neil : yes madam
he mock salutes her and comes after grooming himself
as soon as he comes out fresh , he hovers over her and kisses her on her lips making her startle
she tries to push him but he holds her both hands and kisses her passionately
after the kiss both look at each other panting heavily
Neil : i am sorry
avni : how many times neil ?
neil : am so sorry this will be the last time , plse
avni : neil i dont want u to say sry , i know , i know u dont do it intentionally but anyway it happens and i cant bear it anymore neil , u tell me honestly after marriage did u ever spent time with me ?
neil feels guilty
avni : plse neil , i want ur time , its been one month of our marriage , we didnt even kiss properly
neil : what had we done 5 minutes before? (he asks smirking)
avni : shut up neil , i am serious , what did u say ?
neil : what ?(making an innocent face)
avni : that innocent face of urs wont work neil (she says angrily)
neil pouts
avni : u said that we will spend some time together as no one are there today , but no again u will get a call and u will go there , either work or family , where am i neil ?
neil : r u family too avni , arent u feeling like my family is urs ? (he asks seriously )
avni : i didnt mean that neil , u very well know that , i never said that they are no my family
neil : acha ok ok relax , am sorry , from now for 2 days only u and me , no one else , now plse smile
avni smiles a little bit and hugs him
avni : neil tomorrow is ur birthday and tonight at 12 there is a surprise for u (she says with so much of excitement ) and u must come over there on time
neil : we are anyway going to be together right ?
avni : noo neil , i will go first and then i will mention u the place and time u come there
neil chuckles and kisses her cheeks
neil : i am more than happy seeing ur childlike excitement
avni smiles and pecks his lips
neil pulls her on his lap and kisses her passionately
avni : neil enough now come let us have lunch
neil : no first let me have u
saying this pulls her again for a kiss
avni : neil plse not now , we have whole life or that
neil : no plse avni , i want it now , i am bored of doing it only in the nights
he says shamelessly making her red in embarrassment and shy
avni : shut up neil
neil : what shut up avni , today we got a chance and we have to utilise it , everyday we get stuck in office and with family
avni : its only u MR , u r the one who doesnt have time to spent with me , u spend with everyone but me (saying this she again goes into her angry mode)
neil : sry na yaar , u know na how much even i wait for our time
avni : when neil ? u come to home at 9 and then u will be here in hall with whole family till 11 , when do u come to me ?
neil : avni
avni: i know neil family is very important , i really admire u for loving our family a lot , but what about me neil ?
neil : acha ok baba , now stop getting serious , i promise i will not disappoint u again
he hugs her
neil : love u avni
avni hugs him back
avni : love u too
evening
avni : neil am leaving , u come on time
neil : sure baby
avni : shut up dont baby me , i hate being called like that
neil chuckles : and i very well know y (smirking) , my jealous cutie
avni : shut up neil , i am not jealous
neil : am sorry avni , i didnt know that juhi will kiss me like that
avni keeps quite
neil : plse say something na avni
avni : what should i say neil , what do u want me to say ? i dont like her , u know that , but also u say that she is ur best friend and so i keep quite , now tell me what should i say , if i say anything it is a problem and if i dont , that is also a problem (she huffs angrily)
neil pov : neil beta y did u have to dig ur own grave
neil : avni
avni : its ok neil leave it , i dont want to spoil my mood , ok now am leaving and come on time ok ?
neil : arey wah birthday is mine and hukum is urs
avni chuckles and pecks his lips making him smile
avni : love u neil ,bye , come soon
neil pecks her lips again
neil : love u too darling
after 2 hrs avni msgs him the place and time , she doesnt get any reply
avni : this idiot na , he would have not read the msg, i will call him
she calls him but he doesnt picks the call , she calls 2 to 3 times but again same thing happens
avni : neil i will kill u now
neil calls her back making her relief
avni : where the hell were u neil ? (she angrily asks him)
neil : sorry sorry , i was in washroom
avni : ok , now check the msg which i have sent u and come soon
Neil : ok darling anything else
avni smiles : love u neil
neil : love u more jaan
she smiles and cuts the call
after an hour
avni : what happened to him , y didnt he come yet ? he might have stuck in traffic , i wish he will like the surprise
after 20 minutes
avni : come fast neil (she grunts)
avni : i will call him
she calls him but he doesnt picks her call
avni pov : why is he taking so much time , idiot , i will not talk to him , here i am alone and he is not even concerned
she again calls him but he doesnt pick the call , being impatient she calls landline to check if he started or not , he might have started thats y he is not picking up landline too
avni pov : idiot he might have started late y he is not picking my call , i will show him hell , let him come
after 15 minutes
avni : its already 11.45 , he is not here yet , this idiot , i hate him , i thought to make his birthday special , now let him come i will show him stars clearly
avni being irritated calls him again but again he doesnt pick up
avni : where the hell are u neil (she shouts in her mind)
unfortunately her mobile gets switched off
avni : damn it , y is this happening to me , all this is because of neil
avni pov : its already 10 minutes to 12 , i think i have reach home soon , i will not spare him
saying this she rushes towards their home , the time is 12.10 now and gets shocked seeing the scene
swetha : avni beta ?
avni gets shocked and stays still , she is hurt , very much , she controls her tears
neil is making juhi eat the cake , which is baked by swetha
avni : maa ? you all (controlling her tears)
swetha : yes we are back to surprise neil , how can we leave him on his birthday , i know u r there , but we couldnt stay (she says lovingly looking at neil , while he gives her a smile)
avni just nods her head
swetha : come beta , juhi said that u were at mehta mansion so we , sorry beta we should have waited but its already the time , so we didnt wait
avni looks at neil , she is more hurt now knowing that neil didnt even stop anyone
juhi : and neil too forgot in happiness aunty
avni controls her emotions and anger by making a fist
neil : noo , i didnt get any chance to speak at all
prakash : haan puttar , we are sorry , sorry for not letting u talk , sorry avni beta, we should have waited for u
avni : no papa , maa , plse dont say sry , its my fault i came late
she says this controlling her tears , neil feels disgust on himself and guilty is killing him
swetha : come beta , feed him cake
avni just nods her head and goes beside him
she feeds him the cake , he looks into her eyes and she avoids his gaze not looking at him making him feel worse
avni : happy birthday neil
neil : thank you
avni turns away and starts talking to swetha , neil keeps on glancing at avni , he knew he spoilt everything and its going to be very very tough
bebe : ok bachhoo , i will go and take rest
swetha : even we will go bebe , tomorrow we have a party too and juhi u stay here tonight , avni plse show her guest room
avni just nods her head
avni : good night maa , bebe
swetha (kissing avni's forehead) : good night beta
they all go to their rooms leaving avni , juhi and neil in the hall
avni : juhi come i will show the room
juhi : its ok avni i know the room very well
avni nods her head and leaves from there to her room followed by neil
neil : avni once plse listen
he tries to hold her hand but she jerks away his hand
neil : avni plse
avni rushes inside the washroom banging the door , locking the door she cries her heart out
hey guys i am going through a very hard time , we tested positive for covid , its very hard to focus on anything right now
i have written this days back , i hope u people will like it
take care dearies
love u all
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