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dedicating time (part 1)

Neil : arey yaar please try to understand i only love u , only u , y dont u get that 

juhi : really ? then y were u admiring her ?

neil : i was not admiring her , i was just 

juhi : shut up , again dont try to fool me , i know , all  the guys are same , men will be men , what do u want more ? i have already given my everything to u right ? what more do you want ? (crying holding his collars)

avni sees them and stands there still controlling her tears 

juhi pulls neil more closer to her by his shirt collar

neil : plse baby u r misunderstanding me 

juhi : u dont baby me , go , go to her , never come to me again 

neil : baby please , u really think that low of me , i love u baby 

juhi : really ? do u really love me ?(wiping her tears looking at him innocently)

avni pov : look how innocent she is acting (fuming in anger)

neil (smiling and caressing juhi's cheek) : yes baby , i love u 

juhi smiles and hugs him and he too hugs her back 

juhi : love u too baby 

saying this she kisses his cheeks making him and avni shocked but he smiles at her and hugs her again 

avni leaves from there crying , neil observes this and feels guilty 

juhi : come baby let us go to our room  

Neil : ok chalo 

here avni rushes towards her car and goes to her home 

avni : i hate u neil , i hate u 

 she falls asleep due to tiredness 

director : cut cut , what is this neil ? where is ur concentration ? 

neil : sorry sir , we will do this bit again 

juhi : no i think we have to do it from the start , we didnt romance properly 

neil (angrily ) : no need to do it from the start , only from this bit is enough 

director : yes miss juhi no need to do it from the start , anyway this short film is only for orphanage purpose , so it need not be more romantic 

 neil : exactly 

juhi : i thought the impact will be awesome , sooo....

neil  : no yaar , u know na avni is very possessive, now she will be mad at me 

juhi gets angry but controls her anger faking a smile

juhi : chill na neil , she wont do anything , she should understand this neil 

neil sighs and nods his head

They complete there shooting and neil leaves to his home 

he directly goes into his room and sees her sleeping 

he kisses her cheeks affectionately and keeps on looking at her , admiring her features 

not able to control he kisses her lips making her awake 

she pushes him lightly and glares at him 

avni : first go and wash ur face 

neil laughs out loudly 

neil(pinching her cheeks) : my cutie wifey (he kisses her cheeks)

avni : neil go now (she says sternly)

neil : yes madam 

he mock salutes her and comes after grooming himself 

as soon as he comes out fresh , he hovers over her and kisses her on her lips making her startle 

she tries to push him but he holds her both hands and kisses her passionately 

after the kiss both look at each other panting heavily 

Neil : i am sorry 

avni : how many times neil ?

neil : am so sorry this will be the last time , plse 

avni : neil i dont want u to say sry , i know , i know u dont do it intentionally but anyway it happens and i cant bear it anymore neil , u tell me honestly after marriage did u ever spent time with me ?

neil feels guilty 

avni : plse neil , i want ur time , its been one month of our marriage , we didnt even kiss properly 

neil : what had we done 5 minutes before? (he asks smirking)

avni : shut up neil ,  i am serious , what did u say ?

neil : what ?(making an innocent face)

avni : that innocent face of urs wont work neil (she says angrily)

neil pouts 

avni : u said that we will spend some time together as no one are there today , but no again u will get a call and u will go there , either work or family , where am i neil ?

neil : r u family too avni , arent u feeling like my family is urs ? (he asks seriously )

avni : i didnt mean that neil , u very well know that , i never said that they are no my family 

neil : acha ok ok relax , am sorry , from now for 2 days only u and me , no one else , now plse smile

avni smiles a little bit and hugs him 

avni : neil tomorrow is ur birthday and tonight at 12 there is a surprise for u (she says with so much of excitement ) and u must come over there on time 

neil : we are anyway going to be together right ?

avni : noo neil , i will go first and then i will mention u the place and time u come there

neil chuckles and kisses her cheeks

neil : i am more than happy seeing ur childlike excitement 

avni smiles and pecks his lips 

neil pulls her on his lap and kisses her passionately 

avni : neil enough now come let us have lunch 

neil : no first let me have u 

saying this pulls her again for a kiss 

avni : neil plse not now , we have whole life or that 

neil : no plse avni , i want it now , i am bored of doing it only in the nights  

he says shamelessly making her red in embarrassment and shy

avni : shut up neil 

neil : what shut up avni , today we got a chance and we have to utilise it , everyday we get stuck in office and with family 

avni : its only u MR , u r the one who doesnt have time to spent with me , u spend with everyone but me (saying this she again goes into her angry mode)

neil : sry na yaar , u know na how much even i wait for our time 

avni : when neil ? u come to home at 9 and then u will be here in hall with whole family till 11 , when do u come to me ?

neil : avni 

avni: i know neil family is very important , i really admire u for loving our family a lot , but what about me neil ?

neil : acha ok baba , now stop getting serious , i promise i will not disappoint u again

he hugs her 

neil : love u avni

avni hugs him back 

avni : love u too 

evening 

avni : neil am leaving , u come on time 

neil : sure baby 

avni : shut up dont baby me , i hate being called like that 

neil  chuckles : and i very well know y (smirking) , my jealous cutie

avni : shut up neil , i am not jealous 

neil : am sorry avni , i didnt know that juhi will kiss me like that 

avni keeps quite 

neil : plse say something na avni 

avni : what should i say neil , what do u want me to say ? i dont like her , u know that , but also u say that she is ur best friend and so i keep quite , now tell me what should i say , if i say anything it is a problem and if i dont , that is also a problem (she huffs angrily)

neil pov : neil beta y did u have to dig ur own grave 

neil : avni 

avni : its ok neil leave it , i dont want to spoil my mood , ok now am leaving and come on time ok ?

neil : arey wah birthday is mine and hukum is urs 

avni chuckles and pecks his lips making him smile 

avni : love u neil ,bye , come soon 

neil pecks her lips again 

neil : love u too darling 

after  2 hrs avni msgs him the place and time , she doesnt get any reply 

avni : this idiot na , he would have not read the msg, i will call him 

she calls him but he doesnt picks the call , she calls 2 to 3 times but again same thing happens

avni : neil i will kill u now 

neil calls her back making her relief 

avni : where the hell were u neil ? (she angrily asks him)

neil : sorry sorry , i was in washroom 

avni : ok , now check the msg which i have sent u and come soon  

 Neil : ok darling anything else

avni smiles : love u neil 

neil : love u more jaan 

she smiles and cuts the call 

after an hour 

avni : what happened to him , y didnt he come yet ? he might have stuck in traffic , i wish he will like the surprise 

after 20 minutes 

avni : come fast neil (she grunts)

avni : i will call him 

she calls him but he doesnt picks her call

avni pov : why is he taking so much time , idiot , i will not talk to him , here i am alone and he is not even concerned 

she again calls him but he doesnt pick the call , being impatient she calls landline to check if he started or not , he might have started thats y he is not picking up landline too

avni pov : idiot he might have started late y he is not picking my call  , i will show him hell , let him come 

after 15 minutes 

avni : its already 11.45 , he is not here yet , this idiot , i hate him , i thought to make his birthday special , now let him come i will show him stars clearly 

avni being irritated calls him again but again he doesnt pick up 

avni : where the hell are u neil (she shouts in her mind)

unfortunately her mobile gets switched off 

avni : damn it , y is this happening to me , all this is because of neil 

avni pov : its already 10 minutes to 12 , i think i have reach home soon , i will not spare him 

saying this she rushes towards their home , the time is 12.10 now and gets shocked seeing the scene

swetha : avni beta ?

avni gets shocked and stays still , she is hurt , very much , she controls her tears 

neil is making juhi eat the cake , which is baked by swetha 

avni : maa ? you all (controlling her tears)

swetha : yes we are back to surprise neil , how can we leave him on his birthday , i know u r there , but we couldnt stay (she says lovingly looking at neil , while he gives her a smile)

avni just nods her head 

swetha : come beta , juhi said that u were at mehta mansion so we , sorry beta we should have waited but its already the time , so we didnt wait 

avni looks at neil , she is more hurt now knowing that neil didnt even stop anyone  

juhi : and neil too forgot in happiness aunty 

avni controls her emotions and anger by making a fist 

neil : noo , i didnt get any chance to speak at all 

prakash : haan puttar , we are sorry , sorry for not letting u talk , sorry avni beta, we should have waited for u 

avni : no papa , maa , plse dont say sry , its my fault i came late 

she says this controlling her tears , neil feels disgust on himself and guilty is killing him 

  swetha : come beta , feed him cake 

avni just nods her head and goes beside him 

she feeds him the cake , he looks into her eyes and she avoids his gaze not looking at him making him feel worse 

avni : happy birthday neil 

neil : thank you 

avni turns away and starts talking to swetha , neil keeps on glancing at avni , he knew he spoilt everything and its going to be very very tough 

bebe : ok bachhoo , i will go and take rest 

swetha : even we will go bebe , tomorrow we have a party too  and juhi u stay here tonight , avni plse show her guest room 

avni just nods her head

avni : good night maa , bebe 

swetha (kissing avni's forehead) : good night beta 

they all go to their rooms leaving avni , juhi and neil in the hall

avni : juhi come i will show the room 

juhi : its ok avni i know the room very well 

avni nods her head and leaves from there to her room followed by neil 

neil : avni once plse listen 

he tries to hold her hand but she jerks away his hand 

neil : avni plse 

avni rushes inside the washroom banging the door , locking the door she cries her heart out 



hey guys i am going through a very hard time , we tested positive for covid , its very hard to focus on anything right now

i have written this days back , i hope u people will like it

take care dearies

love u all


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