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Avni comes after refreshing herself ans sighs in relief seeing no one around 

she immediately locks the door , her tears are not in her control anymore

at the same time neela calls her 

Neela : Avni bacha i have to wish neil , please give it to him 

Avni gulps down and tries to speak normal , but no child can hide their sorrows from their mother

neela : Avni ? is everything alright ?

Avni : yy--yeess maa , neiil is not here , i came ot change , he is down yet

neela : avni (sternly) , stop pretending and tell me what is bothering you ?

avni cries her heart out and says everything to neela

neela : first stop crying bacha , my avni is not that weak 

Avni wipes her tears

avni : i dont know what to do maa , i am trying to control but how many days maa , i am his wife and i too want his affection and time 

neela : first calm down urself and dont think i am taking his side 

avni : maa plse 

neela : let me complete 

avni stays silent

neela : think from his point of view , suddenly his family comes and they planned a surprise for him with so much of love then how can he 

avni : then what about me maa? doesnt he consider my love ?

neela : its not like that bacha , being his wife u have to understand him very well and besides even he doesnt know about their arrival , even he was shocked and u told that they didnt let him talk right ?

avni : maa that is really very lame reason , cant he just say about the plans ? or atleast cant he wait for my arrival

neela : u said that ur phone was off and avni once think about it , that if they get to know ur plan how much guilty they would feel for spoiling it and next time they would never plan any surprise for their own son , they will feel as if he is not their person anymore and now he belongs to u and this thought u shouldnt let get into their minds , they should feel that even after the marriage their son  belongs to them as much as he belongs to u and u have to make sure of that . Being a daughter in law is not only taking the responsibility of the family but also spreading more love in the family , bringing happiness to the family too beta , once think if neil says that u have planned for him then the total family's mood might have changed and as i said u have to be the reason for their happiness bacha , i know and u also very well know that neil is very worried and is in guilty pool , dont make him feel guilty bacha , from his side he is not wrong , yes i agree he should have stopped them but then he said that they didnt let him right ? so now stop thinking too much , bacha this marriage is new for him too , dont forget even he wants to spend some time with u , but sometimes it happens , now keep ur sour mood aside and smile and make my son smile , u be angry at him i am not stopping u from showing tantrums that is in between u two people but bacha never exceed a limit , now go to him , i will call him later

avni disconnects the call , washes her face again and goes to find him , she finds him near the pool sitting calmly but deep in thoughts

she silently settles beside him and he looks at her with tears in his eyes

Avni wipes his tears and hugs him , he hugs her back tightly 

neil : am sorry 

avni : happy birthday neil 

she breaks the hug , wipes his tears and kisses him on his eyes

neil : i dont deserve u avni but i cant live without u , i love u 

avni : i love u more than  can think 

he hugs her tightly back again 

neil : i am sorry avni please dont leave me 

avni : do u think that i can live without u ? 

avni again wipes his tears and he wipes hers 

avni : i am sorry , i kind of over reacted , i am sorry , i love u neil 

neil : no am sorry , i am very very sorry 

avni : please neil can we stop this sorry jaap 

neil chuckles and kisses on her forehead 

she cups his cheeks and kisses him passionately

Next morning at dining table 

juhi : Y cant we all go out for a picnic aunty ?

Swetha : thats really a very good idea , what say avni ?

avni slightly smiles 

avni : i dont mind mummy ji , if everyone are ok with it , i am happy to come along with u all

neil : but maa 

juhi : please neil , u dont start now , today no work , we all will enjoy together 

avni gets very angry but she controls herself , this time she doesnt want to initiate and make fool of herself 

 neil looks at avni and finds her neutral 

neil : juhi i 

juhi : please neil we r not going to listen to u 

all the family members laugh seeing neils expressions 

bebe : yes neil i am with juhi in this , we are all going and its final 

neil looks at avni and fnds her smiling slightly at swetha 

In their room 

neil : avni 

avni : yes neil ?

Neil : r u sure u want to go ?

Avni : r u mad , i already gave my answer na 

neil : r u happy ?

avni : what do u think about it neil ?

neil : avni , i dont know , i i-- i think 

avni : come on neil i am really happy , now dont think so much , let us go and enjoy , i dont want us to be sad and think about unnecessary things at least today

neil just nods his head but he very well know that avni is trying to act fine 

At the resort , neil sticks himself to avni and tries to make her happy and she is liking his attention and some corner there is a person who is looking at them with so much of jealous

Juhi smirks evilly and deliberately gets hurt and screams out of her lungs for help

Everyone run towards her 

swetha : omg juhi what happened beta ? 

juhi : ahh ahh aunty its paining a lot , i cant stand 

bebe : neil what r u looking at , pick her up 

neil nods and rushes to pick juhi , avni feels sad but also controls her emotions 

neil picks juhi in his arms and makes her sit on a rock 

swetha : omg ur leg is swelling , we have to take u to doctor 

bebe : yes neil let us go and take her to hospital 

neil nods and picks her again and takes her to the car 

juhi : am sorry neil i spoiled ur birthday 

neil : shut up juhi , first think about urself 

avni runs behind him to match his speed 

he places her in his car and without waiting for avni he rushes towards hospital , avni gets hurt by his act for the n'th time

swetha : avni bacha he is just worried about her , dont think otherwise (swetha observes avni's hurt )

avni smiles slightly and nods her head , i will drive it papa ji , prakash gives her the keys 

they reach hospital 

avni : u all go mummy ji , i will park the car and come

they all go inside and find neil walking towards them 

Neil : where is avni mom ?

Swetha : neil y did u leave her there when she was running to come along with u 

neil : what r u saying mom ?

swetha : u know avni was hurt when u left her there with us and came with juhi here 

neil : but mom 

Avni : mummy ji i am really fine , i really didnt feel bad , she is hurt and i can understand 

to make the surrounding better she says 

avni : haan if this is not the situation and if neil forgets about me i will not spare him 

others chuckle but neil know he again messed it 

night in avneil room , they settle down in their bed , avni rests her head on his chest but she doesnt hug him tightly as she hugs normally 

neil feels very sad and also guilty , whatever is happening is happening because of him , he knew that he is the reason for this situation and he desperately wants to solve this 

Neil : avni 

avni : hmm 

neil : i love u avni 

avni smiles and pecks his chin 

he holds her tightly and pecks her head 

next day 

avni leaves early to her office even before neil wakes up

Neil : maa where is avni 

swetha : she left 

neil : y this early 

Swetha : she had meeting it seems she got a call 

neil : ok 

neil thinks to call her later 

whole days passes but they dont call each other even after missing each other a lot , neil doesnt call due to his work schedule and avni wants him to call her first 

later in the night 

neil : i missed u a lot 

avni : really ?

neil frowns 

neil : what do u mean by that ?

avni : nothing , i missed u too 

she hugs him , she wanted to cry , shout at him , slap him for being a douche bag but keeps silent 

neil holds her tightly 

neil ; i really really missed u , i wanted to come to u , talk to u but today my schedule was very hectic and whole day i didnt get time , i had many meetings

avni : u dont have to explain neil 

neil : i am not justifying avni , i am just sharing what i have done 

avni smiles and pecks his cheek 

neil : i love u 

avni smiles and pecks his lips 

avni : good night neil 

neil feels sad he wanted her to say i love u too , but he know that she is upset with him and he wants to mend it up

one week passed and both didnt had time for each other , avni kept herself busy and neil was genuinely busy 

avni is getting frustrated , she is done with this and now she want to show her frustration on neil 

neil is also getting frustrated with all this , he wants his avni with him 

neil goes to avnis office to take her out for a date 

avni gets shocked seeing him waiting for her 

neil immediately hugs her as soon as she comes out 

he doesnt want to leave her from his arms , he wanted her to stay there in his arms for forever 

avni : neil everyone are looking at us 

neil : let them , i dont care 

avni : neil plse 

avni turns red due to shyness

neil smiles seeing her blush and pecks her lips making her eyes wide

neil chuckles at her expression and takes her to his car

avni : neil my car 

neil : no avni i asked driver to pick ur car , u come with me , today only u and me 

avni gets angry hearing this but she doesnt want to create any scene

avni simply nods and gets inside the car , he knows that she is not letting her frustration out but he wants her to let her heart out , he wants her to demand what she wants as it is her right and he will happily provide whatever she wants , he know that he messed up badly and wanted to make it up for it 

he realised his mistake and took an oath to never repeat the same mistake again

Avni : neil where r u taking me 

neil : i am kidnapping u 

avni rolls her eyes 

avni : tell me neil 

neil : surprise 

avni : neil i really want to go home and sleep , i am very tired 

neil : no we are going out thats it 

avni : i said i dont want to neil 

neil : come on avni 

avni : right now i dont want a fight neil , i really want to go home back 

neil : avni plse , i really wanted to spend some time with u , plse 

avni scoffs and looks other side and sits calmly 

he gets very sad and mad at himself

after sometime he asks her to get out of the car 

avni silently gets out from the car and stands still with a frown on her face

neil comes to her to take her palm in his but at the same time he gets a call and the caller is none other than our very own enemy juhi 

avni fumes in anger and neil gulps down 

he cuts the call 

neil : a--am-amm sorry (he stammers out of fear)

Avni : where did u bring me ?

neil : i know avni i messed up a lot and this time i really am very very sorry and i will never repeat my mistake again , i love u , even i want to be with u , talk to u , spend some time with u 

avni : but unfortunately u dont neil 

a tear rolls down from her eyes

Neil wipes it but again another tear rolls down and then she starts sobbing 

he pulls her in his arms and she cries out loudly 

Avni : i hate u neil , i really hate u , u dont love me , u never loved me , all this is lies 

neil too cries along with her 

neil : i love u stupid , i love u more than anyone in the world , i may not describe my love towards u in words and my actions but trust me , i am here only for u , i want to grow up with u , in ur love, i cant live without u avni , u r my jaan , my lifeline forever , with out u i am nothing , plse dont say that u hate me , i know u love me 

avni doesnt stop her crying and he let her cry 

after few minutes 

neil : acha now plse stop crying jaan , i am sorry 

he pecks her eyes and lips time to time , whispering sweet nothings 

Avni : this time if u repeat na , i will go to my home 

Neil : i will come there too (he pecks her lips)

Avni : so u r going to repeat it again haan ?

neil : no no , i will not reapeat ever again , u will always be my first priority , i will find one or the other way to spend my time with u , i am sorry avni , now i realised how it feels when someone ignores us , i ignored not deliberately though , but i know it had hurt u a lot . am sorry ,  i will never again leave u at any cost for anyone else , i will always give some time for u and will always look forward to spend some time with u , i love u a lot avni 

avni smiles in happiness and kisses him passionately 

later after spending some cosy time with each other they reach home

while sleeping 

neil : good night jaan 

saying this he gives her a lingering kiss 

avni : i love u neil 

neil smiles to the fullest and kisses her passionately 

neil : i love u more 

avni : no i love u more than u love me 

neil : no its me who love u more 

avni : shut up , i love u more okay 

she pushes him away in anger 

he gets shocked y his ladydon 

neil : ok my sherni , whatever u say , but it doesnt change the fact that i love u till eternity 

saying this he again kisses her to stop her from starting the argument over this matter

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