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Fanfiction RESULTS

1st Place goes to YouCanCallMeCorn

2nd Place goes to Nefelibatas_world

3rd Place goes to CroodsGirl

And the rest of the participants get this sticker.


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Judged by Anunimouse96

The Kingmaker by YouCanCallMeCorn

Title 5/5
Cover 5/5
Blurb 5/5
Presentation 5/5
Opening chapter 10/10
Plot 18/20
Grammar 10/10
Vocabulary 8/10
Dialogues 9/10
Characters 9/10
Story development 8/10

Total 92/100

Killer Love by _ashrosez_

Title 3.5/5
Cover 3.5/5
Blurb 3/5
Presentation 4/5
Opening chapter 8/10
Plot 7/20
Grammar 7/10
Vocabulary 8/10
Dialogues 6/10
Characters 6/10
Story development 6/10

Total 62/100

Another Life by VictoriaLachac

Title 4/5
Cover 2.5/5
Blurb 2.5/5
Presentation 2.5/5
Opening chapter 8/10
Plot 10/20
Grammar 9/10
Vocabulary 8/10
Dialogues 8/10
Characters 7/10
Story development 6.5/10

Total 68/100

Drive Me Home by Yeong_fictions

Title 4/5
Cover 4.5/5
Blurb 3.5/5
Presentation 4/5
Opening chapter 7/10
Plot 3/20
Grammar 7/10
Vocabulary 7/10
Dialogues 8/10
Characters 8/10
Story development 3/10

Total 59/100

Cold Faith by Nefelibatas_world

Title 5/5
Cover 5/5
Blurb 4/5
Presentation 5/5
Opening chapter 8/10
Plot 18/20
Grammar 9/10
Vocabulary 9/10
Dialogues 10/10
Characters 8/10
Story development 10/10

Total 91/100

Solus Snippets by Katopark

Title 5/5
Cover 5/5
Blurb 3/5
Presentation 4/5
Opening chapter 8/10
Plot 11/20
Grammar 10/10
Vocabulary 9/10
Dialogues 10/10
Characters 9/10
Story development 5/10

Total 79/100

Clara Spencer by paperbackreads

Title 5/5
Cover 4/5
Blurb 3/5
Presentation 4/5
Opening chapter 7/10
Plot 11/20
Grammar 8/10
Vocabulary 8/10
Dialogues 7/10
Characters 6/10
Story development 5/10

Total 68/100

Iridescent by audreysanders009

Title 2/5
Cover 3/5
Blurb 4/5
Presentation 4/5
Opening chapter 8/10
Plot 14/20
Grammar 8/10
Vocabulary 7/10
Dialogues 6/10
Characters 7/10
Story development 7/10

Total 70/100

A Faded Miracle by Artemis899

Title 2/5
Cover 3.5/5
Blurb 3.5/5
Presentation 3/5
Opening chapter 6/10
Plot 14/20
Grammar 6/10
Vocabulary 7/10
Dialogues 8/10
Characters 8/10
Story development 8/10

Total 72/100

aftermath|life debt by -xaurora

Title 4/5
Cover 4/5
Blurb 3/5
Presentation 4/5
Opening chapter 6/10
Plot 12/20
Grammar 6/10
Vocabulary 7/10
Dialogues 8/10
Characters 8/10
Story development 8/10

Total 70/100

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Judged by -stefaniemo

Star Wars Episode IX: The Descendant of Evil by CroodsGirl

Title 4/5- The title really hit home, and I don’t believe anything can be a more perfect fit.
Cover 3.5/5- The cover is equally a perfect match but its quality somewhat takes away from its aesthetic. Perhaps if the image was sharpened or a filter was added, it’d give the cover a sharp, neat and higher quality look.
Blurb 4.5/5- The blurb is just the right amount of information. It’s not too short or long, and its leading sentences are everything a good blurb should entail.
Presentation 4/5- Organization of prefaces, author’s notes and opening chapters are well presented.
Opening Chapter 9/10- extremely intriguing, had me hooked from the first paragraph. Not a huge Star Wars fan, but you did a great job of immersing readers into that world.
Plot 18/20- Though a fan fiction, I found the plot quite refreshing, a lot of fan fictions seem to play out common tropes without any form of creativity, but yours proved otherwise.
Grammar 9/10- Displayed a high level of coherent language.
Vocabulary 8/10- nothing too fancy, yet the manner in which words are stringed along makes the writer voice unique and hard to miss.
Dialogues 8/10- Dialogues were inserted where necessary and character voices were easy to distinguish from one another.
Characters 9/10- No unnecessary characters that didn’t add anything to the plot, each character had a purpose.
Story development 9/10- story develops fine, just at the right pace.

TOTAL 90/100


The way I want u for me by dwarkaratna

Title 3/5- The title relates to the content.
Cover 2.5/5- The text is hard to read and the overall quality is dull. Could be made better with a clearer font and sharpened background.
Blurb 3.5 /5- The blurb is straight to the point without any unnecessary information.
Presentation 3/5- ‘Achievements,’ chapter should come before the prologue, not after. With the addition of a prologue, you want to make sure your reader scrolls right onto the next chapter without having to pause and scroll past an unrelated content chapter. Also, chapters should not be written in italics, except for certain exceptions like insertion of flashbacks or similar reasons. This is because it makes it harder to read.
Opening Chapter 7/10- It felt like too much was going on. Many characters were speaking all at once and I couldn’t quickly pinpoint the basis of the meeting amongst the characters. A short introductory Paragraph would help, because it would allow the readers to have a sense of understanding as to why the decisions that took place occurred.
Plot 14/20- One thing I noticed (not sure if it’s intentional) is that the book has elements of both drama and prose. The leading paragraph that introduces characters is seemingly written as if it’s a play but the supporting sentences behind each character’s dialogue prove otherwise. In addition, I read as many chapters as I could but I still could not identify a chain reaction of events that contributed majorly to the plot. Chapters felt more as individual stories rather than correlated events.
Grammar 8/10- Chapters displayed good use of grammatical structures and punctuation.
Vocabulary 8/10- The choice was words were a perfect fit, though not completely unique.
Dialogues 7/10- As I mentioned in the plot section, the book contains elements of drama, one of which is use of dialogues in expressing events and situations. The dialogues were alright, but I had trouble identifying the characters who were speaking without reading the supporting sentences.
Characters 6.5/10- Because there are so many characters, it was difficult to pinpoint principal characters to the plot.
Story development 6/10- The story develops alright.

TOTAL 68.5/100


When His Heart Felt Love by ViniShah2

Title 3/5- It summarizes the contents of the book.
Cover 3.5/5- Good enough
Blurb 3/5- A concise description
Presentation 4/5- Chapters are well organized
Opening Chapter 7/10- It’s alright, but it doesn’t really feel like it contributes wholly to the plot.
Plot 15/20- The plot is full of tropes but still a great read.
Grammar 7/10- Good use of grammar.
Vocabulary 8/10- I liked the choice of words that enunciated the writer voice.
Dialogues 7/10- Dialogues between characters are fine- it didn’t feel forced.
Characters 7/10- The characters are written with depth.
Story development 7/10- The story develops alright.

Total 71.5/100

Daydream by strawberry1d

TTitle 3/5- It’s a perfect fit.
Cover 3.5/5- Aesthetically pleasing.
Blurb 3/5- It’s short and straight to the point; intriguing.
Presentation 3/5- The insertion of images into the chapters took away from the presentation quality as I thought you did a good job of creating a visual picture in the mind of readers.
Opening Chapter 8.5/10- I can’t express how much I love second-person narratives. It immersed me into the story and I really felt connected to the plot.
Plot 17/20- It’s not the most unique plot; nonetheless, I found it interesting to read.
Grammar 7/10- Apart from a few spelling errors, the grammar used were coherent and easy to read.
Vocabulary 8/10- I like the choice of words. It was refreshing to read.
Dialogues 8/10- It was easy to tell apart different character voices. The dialogue felt natural between us (the reader) and the characters.
Characters 9/10- I loved the diversity in the various characters presented.
Story development 8/10- The story developed fine.

TOTAL 78/100

He's My Home by MadelainBlack

Title 3/5- A good enough fit.
Cover 2.5/5- It’s alright, but could be made better if the text was enlarged or a brighter and different colour (like white)
Blurb 2.5/5- It feels more of a summary than a blurb. I felt like  I read the whole book in those few sentences. A blurb should invoke curiosity and give out just the right amount of information that would keep a reader intrigued. It shouldn’t contain information that would give away the whole plot.
Presentation 4/5- Chapters are well presented.
Opening Chapter 6.5/10-The opening chapter was good but it could be better if the point of views of the different characters are split into separate chapters instead of switching from one character’s point of view to another multiple times in a chapter.
Plot 15/20- The plot felt rushed. I would have loved to see a build up between the characters. It’s understandable that they have an existing relationship between each other, but building up their storyline would add depth.
Grammar 7/10- There are few spelling errors and some sentences don’t end with a full stop. Also, after the ending quotation mark, a comma should follow (something like this: “Character speaks,”
Vocabulary 7/10- Choice of words is good enough
Dialogues 7/10- The dialogue between characters are alright but separating each characters speech in different paragraphs would make it easier to read. For example, if Character A is speaking, his dialogue should be in one paragraph and when Character B is speaking as well, his dialogue should be in a separate paragraph from the previous one (Character A’s dialogue)
Characters 7/10- The characters are developed alright, though I couldn’t quickly distinguish between one character voice and the other, they were too similar.
Story development 7/10- The story develops fine, although certain occurrences felt rushed.

TOTAL 68.5 /100

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