he chapter start near the end of chapter 21 where it carry on from there  

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we start at the top of the tower, in Ozpin's office, a large amount of smoke flows out from the elevator, masking the entrance of Cinder Fall. She confidently strides to the window across the room, a smirk on her face. As if sensing her presence, the Wyvern climbs up to the top, peers at her through the window, and screeches.

Cinder with a gentle, comforting tone "Shhhh... This is your home now." she say

The Wyvern stares at her and utters a shorter, quieter screech. Cinder backs away from the window and holds her hand out to the side, creating a fireball in her palm. The sound of sparks distracts her, and she looks over her shoulder at the elevator, her fireball dissipating. After a few moments, the sparks come to a stop, and immediately upon the elevator doors' opening, Pyrrha's spear flies toward Cinder, who casually leans to her right to dodge with a smirk on her face.

The spear is soon followed by Pyrrha's shield, backed by Pyrrha herself, and Cinder puts her arms up, blocking it and pushing it away. While Cinder uses fire to hover in the air, Pyrrha calls her spear and shield back to her with polarity, staring down her opponent. Cinder gains a fiery glow around her eyes and swipes her hand through the air, attacking Pyrrha with an arc of fire. She then shoots a stream of fire, which Pyrrha dives over.

Six small fireballs form in a circle behind Cinder, and she sends another streak of fire toward Pyrrha, who barely avoids it. Once again, the Maiden sends a stream of fire the young redhead's way, but this time, Pyrrha blocks it with her shield. She leaps toward Cinder, powering through the flame, and as soon as the fire stops, she spins around and slashes Cinder's arm with her spear. However, Cinder catches the blade and pulls, turning Pyrrha around. Cinder slams her palm into Pyrrha's stomach, and fire bursts forth, blasting Pyrrha away.

Pyrrha slams into a wall and falls to her hands and knees. She then stands back up and faces Cinder with determination still in her eyes. Cinder propels herself forward with flames jetting from her hands, smirking once again. She attempts to slam into Pyrrha's abdomen, but Pyrrha leaps into the air above her and wraps her arm around Cinder's. As Cinder slows to a stop, Pyrrha positions herself to place her feet on the wall behind her and pushes off, flipping herself over Cinder. She uses the momentum to flip and toss Cinder across the floor.

Cinder lands on her front and, as she slides, she pushes off the floor to get back on her feet and perform a back-handspring. Her smirk turns into a look of slight concern upon the sight of Pyrrha charging forward to slam her shield into Cinder's abdomen and push her over. As Cinder stumbles backwards, Pyrrha hits Cinder's right hand with the blunt end of her spear, then slashes Cinder's left hand with the spear's blade. She then spins around and slashes across Cinder's abdomen and legs.

Pyrrha spins around to attack again, but Cinder performs a backflip whilst kicking Pyrrha, with flames trailing behind her foot. The kick knocks Pyrrha into the air, and Pyrrha quickly rights herself. She flips her spear in her grip, holds it back, and then tosses it toward Cinder while firing the gun mechanism. Six fireballs appear around Cinder again, but they dissipate when Cinder backhands the spear away. Pyrrha's shield then flies toward her, and she hits it away, as well. After being momentarily distracted by the shield, Cinder returns her attention to Pyrrha and gains a look of slight surprise, then annoyance.

Pyrrha launches herself toward Cinder and puts her arms around her, tackling her. The two turn each other in mid-air, fighting to be the one on top. Upon their landing, the room fills with a white cloud. When the dust settles, Pyrrha has Cinder in a choke hold, and Cinder is barely managing to hold Pyrrha's spear away from her neck. The Wyvern flies away, and Cinder's eyes begin glowing as she applies heat to the spear in her hands. Her grip tightens as she heats the spear more and more, staring over her shoulder at Pyrrha.

Upon hearing a loud screech, Cinder turns her gaze ahead and smirks, while Pyrrha gains a look of fear. While Pyrrha sets her focus on the Wyvern that is flying toward the tower, Cinder finally snaps the spear's melted blade into pieces. Just before the Wyvern slams its wing into the roof of Ozpin's office, Cinder elbows Pyrrha in the abdomen. The room fills with a green glow as the windows shatter and Pyrrha goes flying across the room. Giant cogs and debris come crashing down in the office, and the structure containing the CCT's transmitter falls to the ground outside, in pieces.

Pyrrha crawls toward her shield, while Cinder watches on from her position levitating off the floor with flame jetting from her feet. While looking for a way to distract Cinder, Pyrrha notices Ozpin's collapsed metal desk and uses her polarity to throw it at the corrupt Maiden, knocking her to the floor. She then quickly grabs her shield and rolls across the floor, sitting up on her knees and holding the shield up. With a burst of flame, Cinder throws the desk off of herself and levitates in the air.

Pyrrha rolls out of the way of two streams of fire that Cinder sends her way and attempts to block a third. However, the force of the third sends Pyrrha tumbling backward, and the floor momentarily catches fire while Pyrrha rolls to her feet. From behind the wall of flame, Pyrrha throws her shield at Cinder, who confidently backhands it away. She then looks up in surprise to see a multitude of giant cogs floating in the air around her. Using her polarity, Pyrrha directs her shield to knock Cinder's feet from beneath her and then slams a cog down on Cinder's abdomen to pin her to the floor. She calls her shield back to her arm, then brings the cogs together into a pile on top of Cinder. However, Cinder blasts them away with a powerful burst of fire, sending them in all directions. One of the cogs flies toward Pyrrha, who raises her shield to block, in vain. The force of the impact slams her into the remains of a wall, taking away the last of her Aura.

Cinder forms an obsidian bow in her hand. As she raises it up and draws back an obsidian arrow, Pyrrha charges forward, spins, and throws her shield at her. Cinder looses the arrow, which shatters upon impact with the side of the shield. However, as the fragments part ways above and below the shield, they glow orange and rejoin each other on the other side. The fragments melt into each other and cool into the shape of an arrow, which continues on its path directly into Pyrrha's ankle. Pyrrha collapses in pain. She attempts to pull herself to her feet, but the pain is too much. Both ends of the arrow break off, making removal impossible. She turns over onto her hands and knees as Cinder moves to stand in front of her.

" It's unfortunate you were promised a power that was never truly yours. " Cinder says as she kneels down and lifts Pyrrha's chin, staring into her eyes and smiling "But take comfort in knowing that I will use it in ways you could never have imagined."

Pyrrha pulls away, sitting up and matching Cinder's stare " Do you believe in destiny?"

Cinder Frowns, narrowing her eyes "Yes." she smirk

Cinder stands back up and forms an obsidian bow and arrow again. She pulls back the arrow, lowering the bow to aim at her weakened opponent. Nearby, Ruby finally reaches the top of the tower, landing in a kneeling position. She looks upon the scene, seeing Pyrrha sitting with her eyes closed, accepting the fate that awaits her. Cinder looses the arrow, which plants itself directly in the center of Pyrrha's chest. Ruby watches in horror as Pyrrha gasps in pain, the wound in her chest emitting a red glow. Cinder approaches her fallen foe and places a hand on Pyrrha's head, using her Maiden powers to flash incinerate her.

Pyrrha instantly ceases all movement and sound, her body glowing orange and then scattering as embers. Her headdress remains in Cinder's hand, and the villain drops it on the floor.

This scene is reflected in Ruby's silver eyes, which widen in despair and become filled with tears. Ruby clenches her fists, curls her arms to her body, and then suddenly flings her arms out to the sides, beginning to levitate slightly off the ground. Brilliant white light flows from her eyes as she screams out the name of her dear friend. " PYRRHAAAAAA!!!!" Ruby yelled

The white light envelopes her, spreading out to the Wyvern and Cinder as Cinder yelled in shock" What"

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down on the ground rex see the bright light as he gasp as he spoke " get down.... get down" he yell un sure of what it was as the clone duck for cover as the scean fades black

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The screen goes white, with a whistle noise playing for several seconds. A pair of voices echo from nearby. "It's alright. I got ya, kiddo. I got ya." it say as the voice fades out and the scean ends

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there we go part 2 of the fall of beacon is done i hope you all enjoy it and if so tell me what you think

Taiyang sighed " Nothing."

Ghira voice "Just turn it off. Without the CCT, there's no point."

Taiyang voice " Communication down across the entire Kingdom, no way to contact the outside world... and Ozpin's still missing."

Qrow voice " Yeah."

Taiyang sighed again " This is bad, Qrow."

Qrow sighed " Yeah, this is bad."

Kail voice " and the girls still hurt i just wish things could change"

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The scene cuts to Ruby asleep in an unfamiliar bed, wearing gray pajamas. Birds are tweeting and sunlight is streaming onto the wall behind the bed's headboard. After a few seconds, she wakes up and looks over to see her father asleep in a chair. She sits up and sighs quietly, causing Taiyang to stir awake " Ruby! " Tai says as he gets up and runs to kneel by her bed "You're awake!"

Ruby look around confused "Ugh... what happened?"

Taiyang smiled "Your uncle Qrow found you, unconscious. He got you out of there, though, and brought you home safe."

Ruby Looks down in thought for a split second, then looks at Taiyang "Wait! Yang! Is she alright!?"

Taiyang sighed " Uh... She's uh... she's gonna be alright. I think she's just... I think it's just gonna take some time for her to get used to things. She's too strong to let this stop her" he  covers his eyes for a moment, sniffling, then looks up, smiling "I'm just glad to have my girls back at home" he say before he remmeber some thing " oh and he brut a friend of yours and her family aka  a Ghira Belladonna and his wife Kali and his daughter Blake""

"blake here " Ruby ask confused " also what happened to the school?! And Vale?! Were they able to clear out the Grimm?"

Taiyang look in to her eyes   " yes your friend and her family here sins the white fang attack there new leader Adam made them traitor meaning they cant go home unless they want to be killed on sight and sins yang and blake close i offerd them here but things at Vale are under control, but the school... It's... it's not that simple. That thing, whatever it is, doesn't seem to be dead. Don't get me wrong, you did a number on it. But it's not disappearing. It's... kind of... frozen. I know that doesn't sound too bad, but it keeps attracting more Grimm to the school."

Ruby tilts her head " i...did... what?" she ask confused seeing her farther look confused "You said I did a number on it. What do you mean?"

Taiyang look at her " I... Look that's not important right now. We can talk about it later. Things are just... kind of a mess."

" It's always a mess." a voice says as  Ruby and Taiyang look to see Qrow suddenly standing in the room, near the door. He finishes off the contents of his flask before continuing.

Qrow look at tai "Mind if we have a minute?"

Taiyang look at him not to happy " What, I can't stay here?!"

Qrow sighed " Tai. Please."

Taiyang stands up, sighs, and then leans in to kiss Ruby on the forehead"  I'm glad you're alright." he say as he starts walking away"  I'll go make us some tea."

Taiyang glares at Qrow on the way out, but the latter doesn't appear to care. As Qrow approaches Ruby's bed, he grabs the chair and drags it with him. He then spins it around to face the bed and sits in it with a significant slouch, crossing one leg over the other " So, how you feeling?" Qrow ask

Ruby look at him "Um... I kind of hurt... all over."

Qrow Chuckles " That makes sense, after what you did " he say as he crosses his arms 

Ruby sighed she did not like hearing this "You guys keep saying that! That I did something! What are you talking about?!" she ask

Qrow uncrosses his arms and legs, leaning forward in the chair " What's the last thing you remember?"

"I ran up the side of the tower, and when I got to the top, I... " then Ruby  gasps, sadness in her eyes "Pyrrha! Is she...?"

Qrow: looks down he hated to say this to her " She's gone."

" I... " Ruby had tears fill her eyes " i... I got to the top... " She begins crying " and I saw Pyrrha... " she then looks angry"  and Cinder... "She grips her blanket, tears falling onto it " and then everything went white!"

Qrow raced a eye brow " Anything else?"

Ruby look at him tears in her eyes " I remember... " she starts   wiping the tears from her eyes"  my head hurting."

Qrow look at her "The night you met Ozpin, what was the first thing he said to you?"

Ruby look confused " I... I don't know. I think it was something about..."

Qrow sighed " Silver eyes. That's an extremely rare trait."

Ruby raced a eye brow "So?"

Qrow smiled " You're special, Ruby. And not in the "Daddy loves his special angel" kind of way. You're special the same way your mom was. Remnant's full of legends and stories, some of them true, some made up. But there's one Oz told me from a very long time ago. Back before Huntsmen, before Kingdoms, it was said that those born with silver eyes were destined to lead the life of a warrior. You see, the creatures of Grimm, the most fearsome monsters mankind had ever encountered, were afraid of those silver-eyed warriors. They were the best of the best. It was said that even a single look from one of these fighters could strike a Grimm down. Heh. It's a ridiculous story."

Ruby look confused "But... you think that I might be..."

Qrow Chuckles "Well, a giant monster is currently frozen on top of Beacon Tower. And you're here, safe in bed." he say as he gets to his feet and walks over to a window, leaning on the sill and staring outside.

Ruby look at him "Wait, wait, how did you know what Ozpin said to me... the night we met?"

Qrow smiled " All those missions I go on... all the times I'm away in some far-off place... it's been for Ozpin. But he's missing now. Something's been set in motion. With Oz gone, I'll have to pick up where he left off."

Ruby look at him " Then what can I do? If I'm so special, then I can help, right?"

Qrow look at her " You really wanna help? Get some rest. You're in no condition to go anywhere right now. " he  starts heading to the door " Besides, our enemy's trail leads all the way to Haven. That'd be quite a trip for a pipsqueak like you. " he say as he winks " Catch ya later, kiddo. " he say as he leaves

Ruby sits alone for a while. She looks at the window that Qrow looked out of, then stares at herself in a mirror hanging on the wall across from her bed.

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Yang sits alone in a spare bedroom, staring out a window. Her remaining piece of Ember Celica rests on the nightstand next to the bed and sitting on  a chair near her bed was Blake just as  Ruby stands in the doorway.

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"yang.... Blake " Ruby ask

Blake turns and smiled seeing Ruby getting up she walk over hugging ruby" Ruby" she says

"blake "ruby hug back smiling  

"ruby" yang smiled a little 

Ruby turns back around, and Yang turns her head to look at her younger sister, tears now in her eyes. Ruby runs over and hugs her. "I'm so glad you're okay!" Ruby says hugging yang before turing to blake " both of you"

"But I'm not..... were not " yang says as she saw Ruby frown and ralease the hug " It's all gone - the school, Penny, Pyrrha, and... " She looks at her severed arm

"yang, where weiss" Ruby ask  

"Weiss' father... came for her" Blake says looking to Ruby

"What? What do you mean?" Ruby ask confused

"No one outside of Vale knows what happened here. Before the tower fell, the last thing people saw was Atlas attacking innocent people and Grimm destroying the city. Everyone's scared. No one knows who to trust. So, Weiss' father came to take her back to Atlas, where he thinks it's safe. She's gone." Yang says angrily 

" after we reach the safe zone the clone aid us the best they can but it was not just vale that got attacked Mountain Glenn killing a large number of clones and atlas solders as it unknown how the white fang got the droid but it was all plan kill the former white fang leader and any threats to being leader or rebels and then take over and aid there allies in attacking beacon" Blake says as she sighed " my mother and farther were thank fully saved by a group of clone commandos known as clone force 99" she says

Ruby start to think about the attack " There has to be a reason why---"

yang soon snaps " : No, there doesn't! Sometimes bad things just happen, Ruby!"

"So, what do we do now?" Blake ask Ruby now wondering 

 "you can do whatever you want. I'm gonna lie here." yang says and when blake went to put a arm on her she shuffed it off " Just leave me alone." she say to them both

Ruby and Blake slowly leaves the room, but Ruby pauses in the doorway, looking over her shoulder to say one last thing. "I love you." she says before leaving as a leaf falls from the tree outside Yang's window and slowly drifts to the ground.

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we now change to Atlas to ironwood office where we find high ranking officer at a meeting with ironwood we see Ironwood and Winter along with Commander Monnk, Commander/ captain rex, Captain Vaughn, Commander Cody, Commander Wolffe, Commander Fox, Captain Mayday, Captain Hozer and a hologram of Commander jet who was at vale as they were having a meeting with ironwood and going over what happen at beacon

the meeting had just start as Ironwood sighed " the fall of beacon is a grate lose to the world with the CCTV tower gone we bearly have any radio chatter around the world but thanks to our tech our new holocoms are more better but we took heavy lose over as we lost over 1000 501st Clones, 1000 212t and 600 shock troopers along with 200 Jet company Unit and 2000 CT troopers we also lost 4 old Atlas air ships, 2 Acclamator-class assault ship, 4 Consular-class cruiser and 1 Arquitens-class light cruiser and there crews and the Venator Iron hand took heavy damage and be a few months until it  back up and running what worse is the White fang have access to droids some how" ironwood sighed

" it unknown how they got the droid " Cody says as he look at his brothers " we blew the base up and Doctor Merlot rotting a way in prison "

"then how the hell did the fang get a large droid army " Monnk ask confused

" i do not know but they hit us hard at  Vale and at Mountain Glenn" jet sighed

 just then door opens as a Clone officer runs in " general" he yell

" what is it " winter ask turing to him and cutting ironwood off " can you not see were in a meeting"

" i know and i am sorry but your want to see this" the officer says walking to the tabel he plug the dater pad in and a hologram of Adam apears

the scean changes showing Adam hologram apearing in all the kingdom from vale to the town of patch from patch to Mistral, from mistral to Argus and then to atlas and so on as Adam hologram spoke " people of Remnant my name is Adam Taurus  and i am the leader of the white fang and its Droid army as you saw our strength  at the battle of beacon we whipped the floor with the atlas lab rats the clones, the huntman and huntress we took down your kingdom and ships and we are not done yet "

the scean changes showing Menagerie the home of the Faunus but it was diffrent as we see a large droid army marching around as we see B1-series battle droid, B2-series Super battle droid and commando droid marching around the city and in the skys Munificent-class star frigate, Recusant-class light destroyer and 5 Providence-class carrier/destroyer are seen floating in the air with a ship yard making more  along with a droid factory almost built

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" we had allies who help us find supply cash that belong to the grate Doctor Merlot and thease  hidden cashes had ships, droid and  more along with blue prints so for the last year we been bulding our army and with our friends who help with the fall of beacon we now have a small army that can match that of the Clones of atlas  and i say this we the people of the white fang and Faunus declare war on the human race and  We can win a war against the humans. Not only because we have the support of other Faunus and crime groups but because the Faunus are the dominant species of this planet. We're better than humans. We have everything humans have and more. Humans shouldn't just fear the Faunus, they should serve the Faunus as we will no longer stand down or look small "Adam says as his hologram ends

back at Ironwood office he growl he saw this video and did not like it " so it war they want then it war there get" he say as the clone all put there helmets on as thing were about to change

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a female Narrator voice start to speak "A smaller, more honest soul... It's true that a simple spark can ignite hope, breathe fire into the hearts of the weary. The ability to derive strength from hope is undoubtedly mankind's greatest attribute. Which is why I will focus all of my power... to snuff it out as how does it feel, knowing that all of your time and effort has been for nothing? That your guardians have failed you? That everything you've built will be torn down before your very eyes? Your faith in mankind was not misplaced. When banded together, unified by a common enemy, they are a noticeable threat. But divide them, place doubt into their minds, and any semblance of power they once had will wash away."

the scan change as  as the above is spoken, Grimm are seen marching toward the ruins of Beacon. In Vale, Glynda is seen trying to repair a shop with her telekinesis, but fails to hold it together. Elsewhere, Blake is seen running across rooftops. She stops to notice Beacon in the distance before continuing onward. Weiss is then shown sitting in a passenger plane with her father with clone guards as escort

"Of course, they won't realize it at first. Like you, they'll cling to their fleeting hope, their aspirations. But this is merely the first move."

As the above is spoken, Ruby is seen visiting her mother's gravestone again, before turning to Blake and heading back to her home a

" So you send your guardians, your Huntsmen and Huntresses, and when they fail and you turn to your smaller soul, know that you send her to the same pitiful demise."

As the above is spoken, the scene then shifts revealing an ominous-looking stone stairway lined with dark, purple crystals. The camera pans up revealing a figure in black overlooking a barren wasteland.

"This is the beginning of the end, Ozpin..." the woman turns her head and smirked "And I can't wait to watch you burn." Her eyes glow ominously as she makes an evil grin

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the screen cuts to  Atlas as we see new made ship yard with  few Venator-class Star Destroyer, Acclamator-class assault ship, Arquitens-class light cruiser, Consular-class cruiser and Atlas airship/ Cruiser all landed as we cut to Ironwood who standing   on a balcony watching as he watch as clone start boarding the transport ships  along with AT TE, AT RT and more tanks the war was about to start 

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the Remnant Clone wars was about to start

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there we go chapter 23 is up and running

i hope you all enjoyed it and hope you like the plot twist where blake with yang and her family being huntted by the white fang

the white fang show the army they been making and the war about to start

who do you think will win

please tell me what you think