『 @khionewrites 』

Hello! My sincerest apologies for how long it has taken to get this review out (･∀ ･; ) but it's here now! I haven't written a review in a while so I apologize if it's not great... again thank you so much for your patience.

✰ cover
The cover is lovely! The purple and blue hues give it this kind of ominous tone and the bright yellow eyes of the wolf contrast against it.

✰ title
The title is interesting. I know that the greek letter epsilon is often used to denote something like a small error in science. I'm assuming that this has something to do with the main character like she perhaps wasn't meant to be bitten. It's just a guess, though!

✰ blurb
So after reading the blurb, I understand that Epsilon is a type of werewolf and not specifically meant to have any definition. I think that's pretty cool! The blurb was very compelling and made me want to know more about the Epsilon type, like what kind of powers they possess. The blurb does a great job at not giving away too much detail, but just enough to hook you in. Great work!

✰ characters
Kyra is a very realistic representation of what it feels like to grow up in a household where you're expected to excel in everything you do. The fact that she no longer enjoys doing what she loved highlights this fact. She also seems to have this deeper issue of not wanting others' help. These are great character flaws that make her who she is and I'm excited to see how she can persevere through these hardships.

✰ plot
The plot of the story was barely starting by the end of chapter 5, but the setup was very well done. There was one question that arose: why didn't the red-eyed wolf kill her? I assume there's an explanation to this, I think that wolf will come back one way or another. I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out!

✰ pacing
The pacing was great! The chapters weren't too long nor too short. However, I felt like we were introduced to Kyra's friend somewhat abruptly and we didn't get a chance to truly meet her. But other than that, everything flowed well.

✰ grammar/language
I honestly didn't find anything wrong with the grammar or the language. Everything was written well, it was easy to follow and the writing style was great. Your descriptions of places and how characters feel are amazing!

✰ overall thoughts
Overall, I thought this novel was superb! There's always room for growth, of course, but you're on your way to writing novels that can be published one day! I truly did enjoy it and might continue reading it when I have the time, nice work :3

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Happy writing!