『 @CrystalCallistral 』

✰ cover
The cover is lovely--very eye-catching.

✰ title
The meaning behind the title is very simple, yet I've never seen one quite like it. It's very unique.

✰ blurb
The blurb is perfect because it tells the reader who the main characters are and what the plot of the story will be without giving too much away. Great work.

✰ characters
Ren is a firecracker, you never know what's going to set him off. It was interesting reading about this organization he's in. Lennox seems like someone who wants to get away from his mundane life. It also must be difficult for him to provide for an ungrateful family, so I feel for him in that sense. You do a great job of characterization. Their personalities really pop out.

✰ plot
The plot is very unique and not something I have read or heard of before. The ideas for these organizations are very distinct. I like that the setting takes place during the war in Britain.

✰ pacing
The pacing was great, I saw no issues with the flow of the story either. Everything felt smooth and well-paced.

✰ grammar/language
I saw nothing wrong with the grammar. Everything was well-written and it flowed smoothly. Nice work!

✰ overall thoughts
Overall, I really enjoyed your story and will probably continue it. Keep up the great work!

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Happy writing!