Hi my name is Amy I'm adopted. I'm only 17 years old, I have brown hair and green eyes with a hint of black, gold and silver. I am looking after my adopted brothers tonight as my adopted parents are out. It's 10 pm that's when trouble started. I heard a strange noise out side. When I looked out the curtains I was shocked what I saw it looked like a minotaur. That's when I saw an army of monsters.
"Upstairs now." I whispered to the boys they looked at me and then ran up the stairs so I followed them. I was scared of what I saw but I have to keep a brave face. When they got to the top I opened the attic. "Go up there and don't make a noise." They looked scared but nodded and went up. After they where up I closed the attic so they where safe. That's when I heard the stairs when I looked standing there where the monsters. One got infront of me.
"You are coming with me." She said. I then realised she was an empousa she has completely white skin, flaming hair, fangs, one bronze leg and one donkey leg, and red eyes. I stood there frozen. She started pushing me down the stairs into the back garden. When we got outside monsters cheered when they saw me. I then realised that there was also people there. I was pushed infront of someone with blond hair and a scar on his face.
"What is your name dear?" I didn't answer him but then he smacked me across the face. "What is your name?"
"Amy." I told him.
"Well Amy I am luke ex son of hermes." He told me.
"What?" I was confused.
"What do you know about the Greeks." He asked me.
"A bit." I told him.
"Well they are all real." I was shocked but why do I need to know this. "Our master is raising and he want you on his side."
"Who?" I asked him.
"Kronos." He told me. That shocked me. He is the dad of the big three and with there sister they put him in tarturus.
"No." I told him.
"What?" He shouted sounding shocked. He then looked like he was thinking. "Fine then if you can defeat some of my army I will let you go."
"If I can't."
"Then you and your family die." He nodded towards the door and standing there are sam and Ty my adopted brothers looking scared. "Pick your weapons." So I looked at them and picked a bow and a sword. I looked for some arrows but I couldn't find any. I pulled the bow string back and saw an arrow there. So I turned around. "Kelly your up." And standing there is the empousa. I got the bow out and pulled the string. When she launched herself at me I let the arrow go and it hit her in the heart making her explode into gold dust. I heard the monsters scream in pain. I looked at them waiting for what will happen next.
"Minotaur your up." Luke said sounding angry. I thought about this one how to defeat him. He charged at me so I dived out of the way and he hit the wall. I ran up behind him and stabbed him with my sword but he spun around and made me fly back words into a tree.i gasped in pain. I grabbed the bow and open fire. Just when the minotaur was upon me he then burst into gold dust.
"Hydra." That's when my heart stopped. Standing there was a five headed Hydra. I tried remembering all the info on Hydra's. All I remember is you cut of one head two shell take its place. I can't think of how to defeat it. That's when I dived to the right and just missed it spitting out fire. That's when I realised how much danger I was in. I hid behind a shed. Trying to think what to do. That's when I opened fire with arrows I just wish they where fire arrows I might stand a chance. That's when the next one I fired was a fire arrow which shocked me. I dived out of the way of one head but unfortunately I didn't see the other head until it was to late. I got snatched into the Hydra's mouth. It's mouth was on my right side. I screamed out in pain wanting it to end. The monsters where cheering. That's when the head got cut of and the stomp got burnt.
"Get away from her." Standing there where a group of girls all holding bows and silver arrows. They all where wearing silver and one had a tiara on her head.
"This is none of your concern hunters." Luke said.
"Yes it is." And then they opened fire. The one with the tiara on her head ran to my side. All the others where covering her.
"Help me move her." She ordered. So another girl came and helped pick me up and they moved me near to the boys. And then they opened fire. My bow got closer to me so I picked it up and opened fire.
"Get the girl." Luke shouted. That's when the monsters started getting closer to me. Sam and Ty ran to me and helped me up so I could shot better. That's when I saw a golden light behind me. When I looked standing there was a woman with blond hair and silver eyes. She was wearing silver but she looked old then the others. That's when the monsters and people retreated. I dropped my bow all my adrenaline leaving my body. I gasped in pain and with the boys help I feel they put me on the floor.
"Amy stay with us." Sam said.
"Help." Ty shouted that got all the girls attention. The older one ran to me.
"Help me get her inside." She ordered. That's when I got picked up and got carried inside the house. Me gasping and crying in pain. I could see Sam and Ty crying.

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