So I finally got the first page sketched out :3  read right to left, I automatically did manga style without thinking XD

Anyways
First one with words: what are you looking at? (jay)
Second: *he notice!* (Alice thoughts)
Of course I did! How can you not notice a person staring into your soul? (jay)
Third: well...(Alice) *hows he hear that...*
Fourth: *did I say it out loud by mistake...* (Alice thought)