Okay tomorrow is ohms birthday and I want to make him a drawing......this is what I did

I want to know if this looks good enough or not. I actually tried my best on this XD is it sad? Probably. I'll post the colored verson when I'm done with it. Thank you all for 4k reads by the way! I honestly didn't think people would actually look at my drawings XD so thank you again for that, and as always I'm open to requests.
Bai~