There's an art shop in my county that's having a contest where we need to make a poster about a problem happening in the world that we care about. My teacher is having us work on it and because week we won't have much time to work on it and it's due on Friday, I took it home to finish it up after about a week of working on it.

Here's it when I brought it home on Friday

And here's it now. I was thinking of going over the words with white paint because my pen ran out of color, my mom says it's fine though. Thoughts?