Short Story Results 💋
Short Story results have taken quite a while, but they're finally here and I am so excited to share them with you! I would like to thank sokeefeismyall for helping me to judge these entries. Do not be disheartened if you have not won as there are plenty of opportunities elsewhere. If you would like your feedback, PM me. Winners, if you would like to claim your stickers, also PM me. Now, let's get onto results...
In 1st Place
Contest Writes - scrabblepost 95/100
Cover: 3/5 -I wasn't too keen on this. It wasn't very appealing and the colour scheme wasn't attractive.
Title: 4/5 - It was a little bland. I'm not sure the title, 'Contest Writes,' was enough to lure in a reader.
Blurb: 9/10 - It was short but alluring which is what I like!
Plot: 14/15 - This was so interesting! I loved the plot and it literally had me hooked.
Flow: 10/10 - no complaints here! Everything was in order and I could easily understand and follow through with the story.
Characters: 14/15 - Characters were portrayed well. I could really feel the emotions they experienced. I felt a connection with the characters, which is brilliant quality for a book to possess.
SPAG: 15/15 - I didn't notice any mistakes in regards to this.
Writing Style: 9.5/10 - The writing style was extremely enjoyable. It engaged me and I loved how you ended the story too!
Overall: 14.5/15 - I enjoyed this so much. The author is truly talented!
In 2nd Place
All You Need Is Hope - Ivashkov20 94.5/100
Cover: 5/5 - I loved the cover! It stood out.
Title: 4/5 - It was a little cliche, but related to the book and was eye-catching
Blurb: 9/10 - This was a suitable length for the story and I found it very encouraging to read.
Plot: 14/15 - The whole idea of love is always going to be pretty cliche. However, I was pleasantly surprised when I realised you didn't express the idea of love the way I am used to seeing. It was very creative!
Flow: 9.5/10 - Everything was structured very well. I just recommend you look out for commas, as missing ones can disrupt the flow.
Characters: 15/15 - Character portrayal was amazing. The author's emotions were expressed beautifully and you portrayed them by showing, rather than telling.
SPAG: 14/15 - There weren't too many mistakes. However, there were a couple misplaced or lack of commas. There was also one instance when 'at' was used instead of 'and'.
Writing Style: 9/10 - This was fantastic! I loved how the author described the anxious feeling too! Vivid descriptions were brilliant.
Overall Review: 15/15 - I really enjoyed reading. I think this is a brilliant book and it is all thanks to the author's stunning writing style.
In 3rd Place
Walls and Towers - Jihan_70917w 90.5/100
Cover: 4.5/5 - It was very intriguing and I liked the way it made me feel.
Title: 4/5- A bit too long for such a short story but other than that it was great.
Blurb: 8/10 - Short so there are not spoilers, gives credit to the designer, just a bit lacking.
Plot: 13/15 - It was vague and mysterious which I like but it was a bit . . too vague.
Flow: 8/10 - In my opinion, it was a bit hard to read.
Characters: 15/15 - Very well explained and described and emotions were displayed expertly.
SPAG: 14/15 - A few issues but not too many.
Writing Style: 9/10 - I loved the style, it just left out a good few details.
Overall Review: 15/15 - I was disappointed at how short it was because I wanted to read more!! I applaud you on that.
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