Humour/Random Results 💋
It's been a long wait, but they're finally here! I would like to thank both judges LeathaTay and paris-R-314 for handing these results in <33
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So lets get straight to it...
In 1st Place
Perception: A Classic Fairytale retelling by LynaForge 100/100
Cover: 5/5 - The cover is pretty. Fits the story.
Title: 5/5 - Fits Perfectly as the story is another perception of the story.
Blurb: 10/10 - Just enough given to hook the reader.
Plot: 15/15 - Loved that this was a retelling of a well known story. It is original!
Flow: 10/10 - Great flow, nonstop.
Characters: 15/15 - Well developed, even relatable.
SPAG: 15/15 - No mistakes.
Writing Style: 10/10 - You have a great way of looking at subjects in the book.
Overall review: 15/15 - You have a passion for writing and it shows in this work. Your characters are well developed. The plot is original. Great writing.
In 2nd Place
On The Tracks by Novel_bae 98/100
Cover: 5/5 - Great cover. The title is on top and it is big which is good.
Title: 5/5 - It's a short and interesting title.
Blurb: 10/10 - The blurb is really good. It is long and descriptive without giving anything away, but also leaving a small cliffhanger at the end.
Plot: 15/15 - A great plot background and story.
Flow: 10/10 - The flow is good and the transitions between chapters are smooth.
Characters: 14/15 - The characters are good, but there are a lot of them and hard to keep track of at first.
SPAG: 14/15 - a couple spelling errors.
Writing Style: 10/10 - The writing is good there is just enough dialogue and there are descriptive thoughts.
Overall Review: 14/15 - A great story I really love everything about it, and I will be reading the other books too.
In 3rd Place
A tie between...
I'm Not Sure Where This Is Going by 0liviaRose436 97/100
Cover: 5/5 - Fun to the point, and has the title big with the author small.
Title: 5/5 - Longish hooking and makes me want to read it.
Blurb: 8/10 - Explains what the story is about, but is only one sentence and doesn't explain in great detail what will be happening.
Plot: 15/15 - Amazing plot there is really nothing else to say. They are a really good writer.
Flow: 10/10 - Flows nicely, there are no big gaps between chapters where there is nothing going on.
Characters: 15/15 - The main character is funny and has lots of depth to them, unlike most stories.
SPAG: 14/15 - Good spelling and grammar, I would have just broken up the paragraphs more.
Writing Style: 10/10 - VERY funny. They have a good sense of humor. The chapter names are also good.
Overall Review: 15/15 - Super funny really good writing and the cover is good too.
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The Rockin' Rodents by variationinmotion 97/100
Cover: 5/5 - The cover is AMAZING. The details are cool and the colors are bright, but not blinding. The font for the title is also very good.
Title: 4/5 - I'm not exactly sure what it means, but I guess it makes me want to find out by reading the story.
Blurb: 10/10 - A fun introduction that makes me want to read the story more. Also very funny.
Plot: 14/15 - The plot is very good. The story is funny, and unique too. You can't know the plot without reading a couple chapters, so you have to read the whole thing to understand it.
Flow: 10/10 - The flow is really good. The chapters don't skip around, and everything is in detail so I know what it looks like.
Characters: 15/15 - The characters are perfect in their own way. They each have their own personality that makes the story funny.
SPAG: 15/15 - Perfect SPAG, no mistakes that I saw.
Writing Style: 10/10 - I really like the writing style, the chapters are long and the description of everything is perfect. They are a very good writer.
Overall review: 14/15 - The story was amazing, the title was okay, it went along with the story, but didn't make sense at first. The writing was funny and the grammar was funny.
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