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📜Reviews by @asperstar📜

Scores Time 

A word from judge:

First of all I would like to congratulate each and everyone of you for participating here. Cause participation matters a lot! It shows your confidence and How courageous you are! 

Okay so let's start with the scores

1)YOU ARE ALL I NEED BY @scribbling_with_love 

You have written story in such a way that it really felt if I am watching a series or a daily soap! As if I got back my favorite show back! Each and every scene felt so real! 

Title YOU ARE ALL I NEED  you used this line in perfect places in your book and this particular line attracted me so much

Keep doing the amazing work on! You have a great potential at it! 

Cover- 5/5

Title   -  ⅘

Blurb -⅘ 

First Impression- 10/10

Plot - 8/10

Writing style -8/10

Language and Grammer - 8/10 

Character development   - 7/10(The suspense plot in your story was awesome) 

Length of chapter -            5/5 

Overall Impression     -      17/20

(The song and the shayari added in each chapter which were apt to the condition were just so perfect and made the story more connecting) 
Participant followed     -10/10

So which makes it a total of
86/100 

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2. FOREVER YOURS by
 @animasikku

Story written by you was so beautiful that I can't really describe it in words. You took such a beautiful subject in your story The problem of casteism in a marriage. Though it's really difficult convincing your parents I feel that they are also correct from their own point of view as they have been grown in that environment. Both Avneil dealt with the matter maturely that's what I loved the most 

Cover- 5/5
Title   - ⅗ (It could have been more attractive just like the story) 

Blurb - 5/5
First Impression- 8/10
Plot - 8/10
Writing style -8/10
Language and Grammer - 8/10 
Character development   - 5/10(I didn't see character developing as the story did) 
Length of chapter -            5/5 
Overall Impression     -      16/20
Participant followed     -10/10

So which makes it a total of
81/100

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3.NAAMKARANN
 BY @avniayesha0786 

Your story didn't have a certain plot about how the story revolves but it had certain things in it which makes it a unique one. Like the different pictures you added in each chapter which had added fun angle in your story and I just laughed the whole time reading it. 

But it would have been really much better if you had made a proper plot and then added this things as a comic angle. But anyways practice makes man perfect and I know you will excel it soon. 

Cover - 5/5
Title    -5/5
Blurb - Not mentioned any (⅕) 
First impression - 6/10
Plot                    -5/10
Writing style      - 610
Language and Grammer- 8/10
Character development-  6/10 
Length of chapters       -7/10
Overall impression      -14/10 
Participant followed   -10/10

Which makes it a total of 73/100 

And also I cannot ignore the hardwork you have put on in finding the pictures  so extra 5 points for that 

And hence now it's a total of
  78/100 

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NOW ONE SHOTS TURN 

1.NOT IN OUR DESTINY 
BY@animasikku 

Stories almost everyone  writes have a happy ending but you decided to give your story a different twist and gave it a sad ending which I think is something unique and which I don't generally read. 

Title -  ⅗(I think it could have been more attractive than this) 
Cover - 5/5 
Blurb - ⅘(It could have been a bit more attractive) 
Plot - ⅘
Language and writing style - 8/10
Overall Impression-  9/10
Participant followed- 10/10 

Which makes it a total of  
40/50 

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2. AVNEIL ONE SHOTS
BY @avniayesha0786

Again it good and fun but without any proper plot 

Title - ⅖ (I think it could have been more attractive than this) 

Cover - 5/5 

Blurb  - ⅖(Not specified any) 

Plot -⅗ 

Language and writing style - 7/10

Overall Impression-  7/10

Participant followed- 10/10 

Which makes it a total of
  36/50 

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To Infinity and Beyond
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