📜Reviews by @asperstar📜
Scores Time
A word from judge:
First of all I would like to congratulate each and everyone of you for participating here. Cause participation matters a lot! It shows your confidence and How courageous you are!
Okay so let's start with the scores
1)YOU ARE ALL I NEED BY @scribbling_with_love
You have written story in such a way that it really felt if I am watching a series or a daily soap! As if I got back my favorite show back! Each and every scene felt so real!
Title YOU ARE ALL I NEED you used this line in perfect places in your book and this particular line attracted me so much
Keep doing the amazing work on! You have a great potential at it!
Cover- 5/5
Title - ⅘
Blurb -⅘
First Impression- 10/10
Plot - 8/10
Writing style -8/10
Language and Grammer - 8/10
Character development - 7/10(The suspense plot in your story was awesome)
Length of chapter - 5/5
Overall Impression - 17/20
(The song and the shayari added in each chapter which were apt to the condition were just so perfect and made the story more connecting)
Participant followed -10/10
So which makes it a total of
86/100
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2. FOREVER YOURS by
@animasikku
Story written by you was so beautiful that I can't really describe it in words. You took such a beautiful subject in your story The problem of casteism in a marriage. Though it's really difficult convincing your parents I feel that they are also correct from their own point of view as they have been grown in that environment. Both Avneil dealt with the matter maturely that's what I loved the most
Cover- 5/5
Title - ⅗ (It could have been more attractive just like the story)
Blurb - 5/5
First Impression- 8/10
Plot - 8/10
Writing style -8/10
Language and Grammer - 8/10
Character development - 5/10(I didn't see character developing as the story did)
Length of chapter - 5/5
Overall Impression - 16/20
Participant followed -10/10
So which makes it a total of
81/100
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3.NAAMKARANN 2
BY @avniayesha0786
Your story didn't have a certain plot about how the story revolves but it had certain things in it which makes it a unique one. Like the different pictures you added in each chapter which had added fun angle in your story and I just laughed the whole time reading it.
But it would have been really much better if you had made a proper plot and then added this things as a comic angle. But anyways practice makes man perfect and I know you will excel it soon.
Cover - 5/5
Title -5/5
Blurb - Not mentioned any (⅕)
First impression - 6/10
Plot -5/10
Writing style - 610
Language and Grammer- 8/10
Character development- 6/10
Length of chapters -7/10
Overall impression -14/10
Participant followed -10/10
Which makes it a total of 73/100
And also I cannot ignore the hardwork you have put on in finding the pictures so extra 5 points for that
And hence now it's a total of
78/100
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NOW ONE SHOTS TURN
1.NOT IN OUR DESTINY
BY@animasikku
Stories almost everyone writes have a happy ending but you decided to give your story a different twist and gave it a sad ending which I think is something unique and which I don't generally read.
Title - ⅗(I think it could have been more attractive than this)
Cover - 5/5
Blurb - ⅘(It could have been a bit more attractive)
Plot - ⅘
Language and writing style - 8/10
Overall Impression- 9/10
Participant followed- 10/10
Which makes it a total of
40/50
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2. AVNEIL ONE SHOTS
BY @avniayesha0786
Again it good and fun but without any proper plot
Title - ⅖ (I think it could have been more attractive than this)
Cover - 5/5
Blurb - ⅖(Not specified any)
Plot -⅗
Language and writing style - 7/10
Overall Impression- 7/10
Participant followed- 10/10
Which makes it a total of
36/50
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