Arranged Marriage! Nah Hidden Marriage by Meghna31117
Reviewer: AnnQueen5
Cover: Looks a little overly photoshopped
Review: Fairly decent as a book. Not so bad actually. I didn't feel necessarily engaged while reading it, but as I have never seen the TV Show or book series it is based on, I expected the fanfictions to be a little confusing to me. I liked how the author held the main plot point back a couple chapters to fully develop the characters before adding in the main plot. It is a detail I admire in this story. Overall, it is well written, and offers many visual aids.
Suggestions: There isn't much to say with suggestions. The book is great in many aspects. I do have a few suggestions though. When putting in passages in a different language, please include a translation, as it will help the reader understand the writing better, without having to translate it themselves. It's an understandable mistake, it was one I had made in my first other language story. Finally, I suggest including some more descriptive language, to spice up the story.
Rating: 3.5 of of 5 stars
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