Thank you CrimsonShadowMask for spending so much time! The results for historical fiction are finally out!

Thank you everyone for participating, the prizes will be distributed later.

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Parth Probodhika: Pristine hues of His Peace by dwarkaratna

1.) Cover: 2/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 7/10

4.) Opening: 6/10

5.) Grammar: 14/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 16/20

9.) Overall Impression: 2/5

TOTAL- 76/100

Parth Probodhika: Pristine hues of His Peace is a book that is firmly placed within traditional and cultural Indian literature. The author has done a good job of introducing the characters, though readers should have some background information about Hinduism, as it marks important Hindu references throughout the story.

The blurb is long but engaging, using rhetorical questions to capture the reader's attention. However, the book cover lacks the alluring nature and could be improved to accurately represent the book's romance genre. Upon further research, I discovered that the lotus on the cover represents purity, enlightenment, and spiritual awakening, which accurately represents the Hinduism in the book.

The description of the characters is detailed, but there are some punctuation errors such as capitalization. To understand the context of the story, readers must have some background knowledge of Hinduism; otherwise, they may become confused.

At the start of the story, I wasn't enthralled, but I gradually began to understand the themes and concepts being presented after conducting some research. The character development is good and progresses well throughout the story. However, I would suggest that the author slowly give readers information instead of dumping it all at once.

The chapters are a good length, and the vocabulary used is appropriate. As this is a sequel, I was initially confused, but I soon gained a better understanding as I read through the book. The author's writing style is unique and not very common, and I would suggest putting the book under the fanfiction genre instead of romance, as readers would have a better understanding of the plot.

In conclusion, Parth Probodhika: Pristine hues of His Place is a book that is rich in traditional and cultural Indian literature. While it may require some background knowledge of Hinduism, the story and characters are engaging and well-developed. The author's unique writing style and attention to detail make this book an interesting and thought-provoking read.

Pandav Atmaja - A tragic end and a new beginning by Shreejita23

1.) Cover: 4/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 7/10

4.) Opening: 6/10

5.) Grammar: 12/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 12/15

8.) Storyline: 18/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 78/100

Pandav Atmaja - A tragic end and a new beginning, written by Shreejita23, is a detailed and engaging book that explores Hindu and Indian culture through the tragic story of Pandav Atmaja. The book provides an extensive background on the characters, their physical appearance, and their clothing and accessories, which helps the reader to visualize them clearly. However, there are a few punctuation and grammar errors that detract from the overall quality of the book.

The prologue, which is written from the narrator's point of view, provides a different perspective for the readers and sets the tone for the story. However, readers unfamiliar with Hindu and Indian context may find it confusing to understand some of the terms used in the book, such as 'uttariya' and 'angavastram.'

The use of flashbacks in a different font helps the audience understand the story better, and the rhetorical questions at the end of some chapters keep the reader engaged. The dialogue is well written and reflects the characters' personalities. However, it would have been better if the author had separated the dialogue of different characters into separate paragraphs to avoid confusion.

Despite the minor errors, the author has done an excellent job of respectfully and positively portraying Hindu and Indian culture and traditions. The tragic story of Pandav Atmaja is both heartbreaking and inspiring, and the book is a must-read for anyone interested in Hindu and Indian culture. Overall, Pandav Atmaja - A tragic end and a new beginning is a well-written and engaging book that is worth reading.

(_Dharmadoot_ your books have been reviewed separately) 

Arjun- In the laps of shastriga

1.) Cover: 3 /5

2.) Title: 4/5

3.) Blurb: 7/10

4.) Opening: 8/10

5.) Grammar: 13/15

6.) Writing Style: 13/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 19/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 84/100

Arjun 1 by @_Dharmadoot_ is a historical fiction novel set in India with a backdrop of Hindu traditions and cultural practices. The book's cover is visually appealing, and the author's vocabulary is impressive. However, there are some areas where the book could be improved to enhance the reader's experience.

Firstly, the prologue should be labeled clearly to prevent readers from skipping it. The prologue serves as an introduction to the story, and readers might misunderstand the plot if they skip it. Moreover, there are minor grammatical and punctuation errors throughout the book, and pointing out specific examples and suggesting how to correct them would be helpful for the author.

Additionally, the characters could be introduced more effectively to help readers understand them better. In Chapter 1, the author fails to introduce a clear purpose for the book, which may lead to confusion among readers. The author could also provide more information about the 11-year time skip, making the plot more engaging for the readers.

The pacing of the book is slow, and the author could improve it by introducing a clearer purpose to keep the readers interested. In Chapter 5, there is another time skip that could be placed in a separate chapter to prevent confusion.

Furthermore, providing a more detailed explanation of Indian background and culture would be helpful for readers who may not be familiar with it. This would help readers understand the story better, making it more enjoyable to read.

In conclusion, Arjun is a well-written historical fiction novel that could benefit from some improvements. The author's impressive vocabulary and the book's accuracy in representing Indian culture are commendable. However, improving the book's pacing, character development, and grammar and punctuation would enhance the overall quality of the book.

Arjun- Becoming the peerless one

1.) Cover: 3 /5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 7/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 13/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 17/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 79/100

Arjun 2 by is a book that showcases the author's respect and knowledge of Indian literature. The blurb and book cover are effective in drawing readers in, and I appreciated the background information provided for all the characters. However, the book may be challenging for readers who are unfamiliar with Hindu and Indian culture, which could limit its audience.

To address this, I suggest the author provides a brief introduction to certain terms and concepts to help readers understand the book's plot and themes. The use of clarifying words such as 'niyog' could be helpful for readers who are not familiar with the terminology.

The author's use of italics is inconsistent, with some words being italicized for no apparent reason. This can be distracting for readers, and I suggest the author revisits their use of italics to ensure consistency.

Finally, while the author provides valuable background information for their characters, the delivery could be improved. Instead of dumping it all at once, the author could slowly and subtly introduce the information so readers have a better understanding of the characters.

In conclusion, Arjun 2 is a book that showcases the author's respect for Indian literature. While it may be challenging for some readers, the effective blurb and book cover draw readers in. The author's use of italics could be improved, and the delivery of background information for the characters could be refined. Overall, it is a book worth reading for those interested in Hindu and Indian culture.

Paancha Praana by mysticalsiya1468

1.) Cover: 4/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 6/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 14/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 17/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 81/100

To start, the cover design is visually appealing and does a good job at drawing in potential readers. However, the blurb could use some editing to make it more concise and engaging. Additionally, the opening sentence of the book is confusing and requires editing to improve clarity. The story itself is unique and has potential, but there are some noticeable errors in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. These errors can be distracting for readers and may take away from the overall reading experience.

The author's delivery of information is good and the dialogue and character emotions are well written. However, it would be beneficial to have the text edited to improve clarity and readability. Additionally, some side characters are introduced well and add depth to the story.

While the book is set in the context of Hindu and Indian culture, the author should be mindful that not all readers may have knowledge of these traditions. To make the book more accessible to a wider audience, the author could consider clarifying confusing terms or providing context for readers unfamiliar with these cultures.

Lastly, the book could benefit from improved graphics and formatting. It may be helpful to consult with professionals who specialize in graphic design to make the book more visually appealing. Additionally, the author should ensure consistency in tense throughout the book to avoid confusion for readers.

MatsyaManikyaa: Eirian Shade of Spring by Unique_as-Myself

1.) Cover: 5 /5

2.) Title:5/5

3.) Blurb: 9/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 12/15

6.) Writing Style: 13/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 17/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 85/100

MatsyaManikyaa: Eirian Shade of Spring by @Unique_as_Myself is a book with an attractive cover that immediately draws in the audience. The author has a fantastic vocabulary and a good grasp of dialogue and description. However, there are some minor punctuation errors that could be rectified with the help of a good editor.

The story is quite detailed and includes a list of characters, which is commendable. However, it can be overwhelming for readers to process all the characters in one go, and some may find it confusing. It might be helpful for the author to introduce the characters gradually, giving readers time to get to know them before diving into the story.

The dialogue in the book is well-written, and the descriptions are vivid and engaging. However, there are some terms used in the book that may not be familiar to all readers. It would be helpful if the author could clarify these terms to ensure that all readers can fully appreciate the story.

Additionally, readers are expected to have some understanding of Indian and Hindu culture to fully understand the book. While it's great that the author has included these cultural elements in the story, it may limit the audience. To reach a wider audience, it may be useful to provide a brief overview of these cultural elements.

Overall, MatsyaManikyaa: Eirian Shade of Spring is a well-written book with good dialogue and description. With a few improvements, such as clarification of confusing terms and introduction of characters, the book could reach an even wider audience.

Akshaya Keerthi~The Rise of Rajat Kumari[✓] by me_idnsd

1.) Cover: 5 /5

2.) Title:3/5

3.) Blurb: 7/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 11/15

6.) Writing Style: 15/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 19/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 84/100

Akshaya Keerthi's "The Rise of Rajat Kumari" is a book that is set in the context of Hindu and Indian culture. The cover art is striking and immediately grabs the attention of potential readers. However, there are some errors in the blurb that could be corrected to improve its effectiveness.

It is evident that the book is heavily influenced by Hindu and Indian culture, and the author does an excellent job of showing respect for these traditions. However, the author should also be mindful that some readers may not have any context or knowledge of these cultures. To make the book more accessible to a wider audience, it would be helpful if the author could clarify any confusing terms or concepts that may be unfamiliar to readers.

Additionally, there are some punctuation and grammar errors that detract from the overall quality of the writing. While the graphics are fantastic, it would be even better if there were more of them to enhance the reading experience. The glossary provided at the end of each chapter is a thoughtful addition, but it may be more effective to subtly incorporate the necessary information into the text to make the reading experience smoother.

Overall, "Akshaya Keerthi~The Rise of Rajat Kumari[✓]" is a captivating read that transports the reader to a fascinating world. With some minor improvements, the book has the potential to attract an even wider audience and become a beloved favorite for fans of historical fiction.

To start, the cover design is visually appealing and does a good job at drawing in potential readers. However, the blurb could use some editing to make it more concise and engaging. Additionally, the opening sentence of the book is confusing and requires editing to improve clarity. The story itself is unique and has potential, but there are some noticeable errors in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. These errors can be distracting for readers and may take away from the overall reading experience.

The author's delivery of information is good and the dialogue and character emotions are well written. However, it would be beneficial to have the text edited to improve clarity and readability. Additionally, some side characters are introduced well and add depth to the story.

While the book is set in the context of Hindu and Indian culture, the author should be mindful that not all readers may have knowledge of these traditions. To make the book more accessible to a wider audience, the author could consider clarifying confusing terms or providing context for readers unfamiliar with these cultures.

Lastly, the book could benefit from improved graphics and formatting. It may be helpful to consult with professionals who specialize in graphic design to make the book more visually appealing. Additionally, the author should ensure consistency in tense throughout the book to avoid confusion for readers.

Those Days in Exile by Astraea1306

1.) Cover: 2/5

2.) Title: 5/5

3.) Blurb: 8/10

4.) Opening: 8/10

5.) Grammar: 13/15

6.) Writing Style: 14/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 17/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

TOTAL- 84/100

"Those Days in Exile" by @Astraea1306 is an accurately titled book that delivers a well-developed background story for the characters. The author does an excellent job of differentiating the characters' thoughts from the rest of the text through the use of italics. The graphics are also impressive, complementing the narrative's mood and tone. The author uses excellent vocabulary and descriptions, which give the book a unique quality.

However, some scenes in the book, such as the burning of hands, could make some readers uncomfortable. Therefore, it is advisable for the author to include a warning label at the beginning of such chapters for viewer discretion. The book also contains some minor punctuation errors that could be corrected with the help of an editor.

The book's context is heavily reliant on Hinduism, and readers without background knowledge in this area may struggle to understand some of the concepts and terminologies. The author should consider providing brief explanations to clarify these terms for a broader audience.

The book also has some tense inconsistencies, switching between past and present tense, which can be confusing. Despite these issues, the author does an excellent job of conveying the characters' ideologies and emotions. The book is a must-read for anyone interested in a well-written and immersive narrative with an Indian/Hindu backdrop.

Aranika Devi by Aru_6002

1.) Cover: 2/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 6/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 14/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 19/20

9.) Overall Impression: 3/5

total-80/100

The blurb of this book is quite long and could benefit from some editing. However, the cover is decent, although it could be made more visually appealing with some enhancements. There are a few punctuation errors that could be corrected with the help of an editor.

One of the strengths of this book is its good dialogue, although there could be more of it to keep the reader engaged. The author makes use of italics for flashbacks, which is a useful technique to differentiate them from the main storyline. Additionally, the author does a good job of providing detailed character information that helps the reader get invested in the story. The interactions between characters are well-written and add depth to the plot. The author's use of description is also noteworthy, as it adds to the immersion of the reader in the story.

However, there are a few spelling errors that could be corrected to enhance the overall reading experience. It's also important to note that to fully understand the context of the story, readers must have some background knowledge of Hinduism; otherwise, they may become confused.

In conclusion, while ARANIKA DEVI 1 has some areas that could be improved, such as the blurb length and punctuation errors, it is still an enjoyable read with good dialogue, detailed character information, and immersive descriptions. The author has done a commendable job of respecting Hinduism in their writing, which should be appreciated.

~WINNERS~

2nd Place

Amitavā: The Song of Mahabharat by panchxlratna

1.) Cover: 4/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 8/10

4.) Opening: 6/10

5.) Grammar: 12/15

6.) Writing Style: 11/15

7.) Characters: 12/15

8.) Storyline: 18/20

9.) Overall Impression: 2/5

TOTAL- 86/100

Amitavā: The Song of Mahabharat, written by @panchxlratna, is a historical fiction book that captures the essence of the Hindu epic, Mahabharat. The cover of the book is aesthetically pleasing and catches the reader's attention, while the blurb, though could be more engaging, is still interesting enough to attract readers.

The author has done an impressive job in providing detailed physical descriptions of the characters and setting, which adds depth and richness to the story. The language used is good, and the vocabulary is impressive.

However, there are some minor grammatical and punctuation errors that could have been avoided with better editing. The use of incorrect punctuation such as ! or ? in dialogues could be improved to enhance the overall quality of the characters.

It is worth noting that readers must have a background in Hinduism and Indian culture to fully appreciate the book's content. The inclusion of different languages adds authenticity to the story, but subtle translations would make it more accessible to a wider audience.

Overall, Amitavā: The Song of Mahabharat is a well-crafted historical fiction book that will appeal to readers with an interest in Hindu mythology and Indian culture.

1st PLACE

The queen of arrows by BellOfSilence

1.) Cover: 5 /5

2.) Title:5/5

3.) Blurb: 9/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 15/15

6.) Writing Style: 15/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 19/20

9.) Overall Impression: 4.5/5

TOTAL- 93.5/100

The Queen of Arrows by @BellOfSilence is a historical fiction novel that will transport you to a different time and place. The book is an engaging read, and I was thoroughly impressed by its quality. The graphics, punctuation, vocabulary, spellings, and descriptions are all superb, and they contribute to the book's overall excellence.

The historical genre is accurately represented, and the author has provided a lot of background information to help readers understand the story better. This enhances the story, making it a more enjoyable read. The book's graphics match perfectly with the tone, and the cliffhangers are engaging.

One suggestion for improvement would be to space out long paragraphs to make the book easier to read. However, this is a minor issue and does not detract from the book's overall quality.

In conclusion, The Queen of Arrows by @BellOfSilence is an amazing book that I highly recommend. It is well-written, accurately represents the historical genre, and is an engaging read. The graphics, punctuation, vocabulary, spellings, and descriptions are all superb, and the book's cliffhangers are engaging. If you enjoy historical fiction novels, this is a must-read.

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