❤Last Set of Results❤
"I like that quotes of her"
"I love the way he describes that character"
" That castle holds a Mystery"
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Ok...now let's see some talented amazing writers who participated this competition willingly. With their scores.*still chewing the food*
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Scoreboards(first round):
This book of Sewman_Returns with the title If it meant to save the world.
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First Chapter: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Writing Skill: 9/10
Enjoyment while reading: 10/10
Total:- 57.
This book of G7_Nyoungie with the title Lost
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First Chapter: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Writing Skill: 9/10
Enjoyment while reading: 9/10
Total:- 55
This book of knettle with the title Watch Out
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First Chapter: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Writing Skill: 10/10
Enjoyment while reading: 9/10
Total:- 58
This book Chloe_Roissere with the title Aria.
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First Chapter: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 10/10
Writing Skill: 8/10
Enjoyment while reading: 8/10
Total:- 52
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This book of mika_mba04with the title A Degree in Murder.
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First Chapter: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Writing Skill: 9/10
Enjoyment while reading: 8/10
Total:- 52
#MY LIFE: HOW'S IT GOING !
By Harm18Rma
Title: 4.5/5
Blurb: 4.5/5
First Chapter: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Writing skills: 9/10
Enjoyment while reading: 9/10
Total: 52 /60
The title is good. It gives us an idea of what the story is about. The blurb was awesome!!
It maybe needs a few corrections. ( Which is only what I think)
[E.g] Life's harsh.
It always is.
Life's harsh,
It always was and it is.
The first chapters of the autobiography really made me cry. Your writing skills are amazing!
And grammars too. They maybe just need some corrections.
Thnx!!!
#THE CHARMER AND THE SPELLCASTER !
By JanceyPhoenix
Title: 3.5/ 5
Blurb: 4/ 5
First Chapter: 8.5/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 7.5/10
Writing skills: 8.5/10
Enjoyment while reading: 9/10
Total: 50 /60
The choice of the title is good, but could've been better. The blurb gives a small description
about the story,but doesn't give it away. And, the blurb is good enough to make people
curious about it. The grammar is alright, there's just some words which need to be replaced
and some silly mistakes.
(E.g.) [Prologue]
"She killed many…
But today her hands were shaking, her brain was going blank…
she was felling apart."
'She killed many…
But today, her hands were shaking…
Her mind was going blank..
She was falling apart. (This is just an example of what I think it should be like. . . Sorry if
you feel offended.) '
Your writing skills are good enough, just try adding space between the sentences and use
quotation marks when you use the bolds to write his/her/their inner thoughts.
I loved reading the story! It is really interesting and intriguing.
Thnx!!!
#COLLIDE !
By 2storytime
Title: 4/5
Blurb: 4.5/5
First Chapter: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Writing Skills: 9/10
Enjoyment while reading : 9/10
Total: 50.5/60
The title was interesting and the blurb was intriguing. I liked the plot very much!
Your grammar is good but checkout for the spellings. Your writing skills are amazing!!
I felt like I was in a movie. (Ofc as a third-wheel XD). I enjoyyyyeddddd reading it veryyy
much!!
P.S : Try reading the comments. I saw some of your readers commented the
words/sentences which need to be corrected.
Thnxx!!!
#ANTI-EVERYTHING
By mitalip568
Title: 3.5/5
Blurb: 4 /5
First chapter: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 7.5/10
Writing skills: 8/10
Enjoyment while reading: 8/10
Total: 47/60
#WHIRLWIND !
By softyhartz
Title: 4.5/5
Blurb: 4 /5
First chapter: 8.5/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Writing skills: 9/10
Enjoyment while reading: 8/10
Total: 51/60
Review: Very good book which gives cinematic feelings. I hope you will rise high in future!
Precious thoughts and quotes by RiyaMaji
1. Tittle: 5/5
2. Blurb: 3/5
3. First Chapter: 10/10
4. Plot: 10/10
5. Grammar: 10/10
6. Writing Skill: 10/10
7. Enjoyment while reading: 10/10
Total: 57/60
Review: I truly enjoyed reading this book. The things written in it are completely true. I loved
the book and though I knew that I was only required to read 3-4 chapters of the book I could
not stop there, I just had to read more and so I ended up reading the whole book. I couldn’t
find any mistakes in grammar or spelling. The book was almost perfect but then again I don’t
think I have even read a professional book that’s perfect. This book also had its weak point,
which was the blurb.The blurb could’ve been longer and a bit more descriptive. Overall, this
book was a treat to read!
RANT-a-lot by Victorie5802gal
1. Tittle: 4/5
2. Blurb: 3/5
3. First Chapter: 9/10
4. Plot: 4/10
5. Grammar: 8/10
6. Writing Skill: 5/10
7. Enjoyment while reading: 5/10
Total: 38/60
The taste of loneliness by JessieZhu
1. Tittle: 5/5
2. Blurb: 2/5
3. First Chapter: 9.5/10
4. Plot: 10/10
5. Grammar: 9/10
6. Writing Skill: 10/10
7. Enjoyment while reading: 8/10
Total: 53.5/60
Online love mistake by bhumikverma9666
1. Tittle: 5/5
2. Blurb: 4/5
3. First Chapter: 9/10
4. Plot: 10/10
5. Grammar: 9/10
6. Writing Skill: 10/10
7. Enjoyment while reading: 9/10
Total: 56/60
Till this trip ends by JanceyPhoenix
1. Tittle: 5/5
2. Blurb: 5/5
3. First Chapter: 8/10
4. Plot: 9/10
5. Grammar: 8/10
6. Writing Skill: 9/10
7. Enjoyment while reading: 10/10
Total: 54/60
Now to the big results
3rd place
Whirlwind by softyhartz
And If it meant to save the world by Sewman_Returns
Scoring 50/60 in final round
2nd place
My life:How it's going
By Harm18Rma
Scoring 51/60 in final round
1st place
VACILLANT by ever_after04
Scoring 53/60 in final round
Congratulations
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Others did well tooo. It was hard to select 1st 2nd Nd 3rd places!!
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