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Author messed up!

You don't really need to read this, it's just for some people who have been complaining about Karma.

Okay, thanks to one of the readers dm-ing me on instagram, I have realised one of my key mistakes in this story. Karma is a so called 'yandere', and I realised I haven't exactly done proper character set up for Yandere. More like just a boy who's in love and a little short tempered.

Let me get in depths real quick. A yandere boy or girl, are  people who act quite kind and honest natured on the outside, wich to an extent Karma does, however they become love sick/obsessed with someone because they're the only person that makes them feel alive. Hense with the 'Karma sneaks into Nagisas back garden to me sure Nagisa is asleep safe and sound, is actually just an excuse to go and see Nagisa before he goes to bed, and on the of chance Nagisa is doing something Karma might like to see. That was kind of demonstrated from day one. And I gave of the Yandere Vibe with the whole killing Kayano bit...However!

Whenever someone is love sick, being around the person that makes them that way, feels intoxicating and arousing for the Yandere. Karma and Nagisa regularly hang out and are actually quite close in the story. And Karmas thoughts and actions during their time together, are fairly neutral, apart from a few select times he's mentioned his mouth watering.

I really need to fix this! Otherwise he changes from a Yandere to a kinda...Love sick murderer, wich isn't a yandere.

Yanderes hide their Evil Nature and replace with a socially exceptable nature. A yandere is someone who is actually quite depressed or doesn't feel emotion at all, yet one day they find someone who makes them feel all theese new emotions, or makes them feel a little happier. Thats where they decide that they will do anything for the person.

Legit all this chapter is, is me owning my mistakes in Character Analysis.

My solution? Well...you might not like it...

So over the course of the story, I've decided Karma is going to become...well...more creepy in terms of Nagisa. More stalker like and More love sick like.

Course people are still going to die, I have several horrifying torture methods I am planning on using.

(One of them involves a blender)

As for Nagisa. Over the last chapter (Her Doll) he realised his feelings for karma. However, because I'm a bitch, I'm going to hold of on him really getting a deep grasp of the feelings.

He knows that he thinks of Karma as more than a best friend, and he knows he may potentially have a sort of gay feeling toward him, but he doesn't exactly know if that just because he's vv close with karma.

Long story short: I messed up the Character analysis, but I'm going to fix it!!!

Author out.

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