Chatter NEIN Teh Evil Tigger and holY
I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS YOUR GOING 2 HEL LJESS IS OYUR SAVER ((You got to admit, she's got dedication))

"Ohno its HolyLeaf!" yelled FireStra he ranned away. SandStrom wnet aftre him. ((So now they're wimps, huh))

StarGlaem locked up. ((Stargleam, STOP LOCKING PEOPLE UP!!!)) HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr.

"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" ((Dangit, Tigger was just hanging out in Winnie the Pooh!)) she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!"

"we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. ((WHAT!! HOLLYLEAF WOULD NEVER DO THAT!!))

"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar.

"U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!" ((why))

StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way. ((How did you not notice it!))

"OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM! ((You just said you didn't notice))

a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter ((Deflate your ego, young one)) i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER ((Probably just constuctive criticism))