Chapter Ate The Serimmony 1 ((Why did the chapter eat the 'serimmony'))
STOP REVOFIGN BAD! but than u JASZpAW for tehh godo revewis uve ben levving

StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?"

"nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!' ((NOOOOO))

"MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw.

YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war ((So now she's a war)) for onll 3.14  dayss ((Pi days, huh)) butt u are the best apent ice in the cAlan. Ur perfect. ((And you're delusional)) We ndd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. " ((You said it yourself she's the war))

"omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed!

"Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wass ok she newt wht wus best. ((Canon beats all in my head))

"OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!"

"Oak" ((Leave the trees out of this Firestar)) said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!" ((Cause that's totally it how goes))

"Tday we are making a new Warrior."

The calnn GASPED! ((Because it's such a rare occurance for an apprentice to become a warrior))

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan.((How did they know it was her? It could've been a different apprentice)) They all new infancy it was she whom was beng mad a warrior.

Starpaw was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life!

"StarPaw....." said FirePaw. He was simile ((Simile as in the figurative language thing?)) like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:"

"Yes!" she shock3d.

"oak." ((Just oak?)) Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw for your pel which sings like the starss and ur conectin 2 StarClann. We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness." ((*rolls eyes* why am I even reviewing this?))

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. ((She's still an apprentice? YAY!)) They

StarGleam girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!"

"FireScar," she said, cuming over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sirously at him.

"yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres.

Dos he knew? StarGlema think.

"Firestar...." She brethed. She cullednt she was actually dong this after so lung. ((Cause a few minutes is so long))

"I....."

WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp.

It was....

HOLYLEAF! ((I'll consider her holy if she kills Stargleam))

I workd reall' herd on dis chapter n tired 2 spell good so plzz review NICE! ((Because that's so evident))

The sarcasm is real in this chapter.