Catter 1 The Fiht Aganst the Sitters 1

"Oh nose!" yellded StarPaw she wus so horrorifed. "LakePaool is buck and seh is NUT OKA!" ((Uh duh!))

"Of coarse im not okay!"((Almost what I said)) LakeFall screchemd loadly she issed at  StarGlame. "I'm being posesd by HolyLeaf wut do you THINK!" ((She can't think though)) she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so surpissed she culdn;t mofe ((Good, she'll die))

Then... "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" It was...

REDPAW! Redpaw runnth over to StarPaw and jumped in font of herr and LakePolawm hit her insta. ((Insta Noodles. I'm hungry))

"Nuu Redpaw!" chked StarGlamea and she locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" ((Oh yeah I'm bleeding but I'm okay!)) she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! ((She should have let Stargleam die)) she sed and then he did. StarFlame locked at RedPaw she wus so buttifly then StarGleam shock her hud. "No Im STRREET!" ((Okay cars now is the time. Go run her over!)) she taught madly. ((So now we have evil, mad teachers. Great)) "but now what do we dao agant LakePaw!" she lucked up. LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she was WIDESPED!

"NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem ((How do you whisper in Caps Locks?)) and she ran towed LionBlaze and she hit LakePaw, who did to.

"StarGlame I will get u for thiss11 sed LakePaw as SatinClaw drag away to hellClan. ((What in Tartar Sauce?)) He waswerng oink naie Polish. ((So a demon is wearing pink nail polish. That makes so much sense)) then StarGlame stinted to crry as she realed that her sitter ass ded. ((her butt is dead because of you))

"you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a bare. "Ilus get you for thi!" she saud and then she rudhed at StarPlame. "Oh o!" yelld every1 "tarPaw got our of the Way!" ((Does nothing except yell 'Get out of the way'. Genius))

Tim semd to slow danw as StarPawlem run awy  ((Tenses don't help her!))from the bare. But she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" ((And Tigger's back))

"Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. ((And now Tigger is a straw)) "You ar gong to did now!" And he held out... SOME JEW! ((Great. It's WW2 all over again))

"Omg jyew!" elld FamePaw she locked at the yew. "But it wooden work becas thers a lizded on it." ((What the Tartar Sauce?)) They all locked at the lizard. It wus a newt. The nwt ran away. ((Bye newt!))

"... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr!

"Ete the yew!" ((Cause that will totally work. Actually it would, Stargleam is an idiot)) sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" ((Dangit, just eat it!)) she esked and then she held "YOUE NEVER TOOK ME ALIV!" ((*Partners in Crime starts to blare*))

"are you so sur?" aksed TigerClar and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and ran away. "Youl never cathg me!1111 he laght meanly. "Im gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he luf. ((Why. The stupidity, why))

Guyx I ben working relly hard on this wile I was gon. ((It still isn't good)) im sor'ry for the wait. Revew betetr and ill updat mor quick ((How about you learn Grammar and spelling before))