Cahpter 13 The Metang wit Sartcaln ((Is there a Pokemon reference?))
"Omigish what happnd! shrekd StarPaw. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan?" she eskes when she say the cats that she new.

"No of cours not your in the Daek Forest!" ((I personally would prefer it, but that's my opinion)) gagged a gray he-cat. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in SatrCaln! said the she-ca. It was YellowFang. ((Hey, you do know you just called Yellowfang a he-cat five sentences ago)) "Wher else wood you be?"

"Yuo dont need to be so red! said StarGlame she was mad." ((Yellowfang red? Hardly likely))

sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made."

"its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE? ((What do you mean how do you dye, you were able to dye your fur))

"TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the drk Foret"

"Wait so then I'm died?" StarGlame. "What do i do no? I cant safve the frost like this!" ((I'm not sure the frost would want you to save it))

"That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!"((please no, I feel like she's causing more destruction than good)) saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first."

"Omg what is it" lauged StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe. ((Who's this random Joe?)) " "I wnat to knew" ((Be patient child))

"wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you before you goe" said LeafPool and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons!" ((You know what, I reject humanity, I will make my own))

"OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was so exited. "I GET TO HAVE TEN COMMNDMENTS?"

"Ya" said BleuStar "we need to give them to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four us!"

"Okay" said StarGlame and she left Starclan talking the rocks with her.  

((It's been so long since I have updated this, now I know why))