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Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars

Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one!((Starpaw,Shed one is in the middle of nowhere!)) Noone cod hurt her family now .((No one did, βλάκα))

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!"((But Firestar, she already can because she's a Mary Sue!))

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."

"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies.((What bodies?)) "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog."((*barks* Did I pass?))

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything! ((cough Mary Sue, cough))

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding.((Starpaw's cheating! She had her claws out!)) "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome."((She clawed you and you're complimenting her!?)) "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? ((Dolphins and Porphesies don't meow, Starpaw))

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar.((Snarl at her more!)) "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.,"((Yeah sure, Bluestar totally didn't do that before , only she had her claws SHEATHED!))

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? ((Yes, you are)) "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. ((NO! Firestar don't do it!))

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired.((She has a flaw! She doesn't have unlimited amount of stanima! EVERYONE! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!))

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."((Forgetting the code, are you))

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun.((She CLAWED you!)) So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_.((Why, Firestar.Why))

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars.((Why did you lock up the stars? they didn't do anything to you.)) She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. ((They have a clan called Holeclan. The wonders!))

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."

"Ya totally."((Hopefully soon)) Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!" ((That would be an awful generation))

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) ((I wasn't thinking it in that way, Yeesh.)) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.

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