((Drug mentioned in the title. Good job writer *note my sarcasm*)) Ok jazzie-kun pleas dont hate me cause your not in it yet. You'l appear soon dont worry.

StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom  wouldn't let her sleep not today.

"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning((Shinning as shins)). "Today is important today." ((Still wouldn't make much sense if the second today was actually day))

"What is it Mom" ((Do warriors even call their mothers Mom?)) said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was.

"Ohmigosh ((OhmySTARCLAN a cat that believes in Starclan said Ohmigosh. really author?)) its my serimony today!" she squelled excercisedly((what the Tartar sauce?)) Today is the day she was an apprentice 

She flicked outside not even waiting for her mom. But her mom cot up to her quick ((I swear Dawnsparkle is a shape-shifter!))

"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike us sometimes." She said.

StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom usedto be Shadowclan her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! ((welp, let's replace this person with someone who actually wants to be special, that might make the story better))

"StarKit come here." FireStar said from the leg ((Oh yes, the nice leg in Thunderclan camp)). He jumped down.

"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor you." ((Mary-Sue Alert!))

Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow"

Firehert((I feel like my classmates would be like,"Ohh, you just got downgraded)) liked her shoulder ((Wow Firestar. What about Sandstorm!)). He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was Starpaw I know ti." ((Sing Firestar! Sing!))

Suprised she walked away when they were done howling for her ((Is the whole clan shape-shifters?))./ Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod. ((Did they want to prod Starpaw because they didn't like her?))

"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said JayFeather his chest puffed ouit."You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of darkness stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."

StarPaw gasped. what does it mean? ((Oblivious protagonist is oblivious))

lol I update fast dont I. REVIEW or ill hit you over the head with a frying pan ((You're crazy))! XDD jk

So this is where the editing starts happening. I'm too lazy to do the prologue.