Cahpter 12 The Sark Forest ((Hey, why are twolegs here?))"NO!" yewled StarKit. She run after TigerClaw. but he was to fat. ((Why don't you tell that to his face?)) She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so tried so sad, Teres begun to role down her face: her sitser was deed and tigerstar had ExcapeD! ((Your fault because you were born (edit from a far away land, I realize I'm probably being to harsh))

"y am I so ulsess?/?/' ((The most true sentence said ever)) she dsked. "why couldnt i kill her?" "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" SHE SAID JUMPED. ((Freakin' stop yelling all the time!))

It juts me. " said JayWing waking to bedside her. ((So, this is Jay's Wing. huh, I must have missed something)) "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." "what" said StarGleam "What dlo you men."

"hes in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" ((No Styx!)) oh no what do I do thouth starGeam.

"we can go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." Mewled Jayfeater. ((ver danger, not scare)) "tack me their!" sad StarGleam. ((Yes, play pin the tail on Stargleam or whatever rank she is))

She slepped and then they were in the Fark Forest. It was dark. ((No freakin' dur, thanks Captain Obvious))  Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and it wass heard to see. They herd voices! It wass TiggerStar!

"ok tjen well kell her ND invade Thundercaln" ((And he says it right when she got there)) he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw she jumped at him. she was aboot to hit him when BlackStripe was there! "TIGERSAR WATCH OUT" said BlackStrip. ((Don't laugh, don't laugh *Starts laughing uncontrollably* ah, dangit))  TierStar loocked at her and he clawed her. It wasnt fare! ((yes it is, you're a delusional kit warrior))

StarGleam fell to the ground blood was cuming from a wand on her sholder. It was a lot of red blod. ((Whew, I thought it would be rainbow)) HawekFrost Looked at her. ((What are you doing)) She was so buetiful so kawai, ((Don't do it)) he was thought just like FirStar. He loved her. ((Why! I actually liked Hawkfrost! I will hunt you down author ( another edit from a far away land, I won' actually hunt the author down)) He had to save her.

He jumped in TiggerStar! He bit him! But it wa s to lat. StarPaw was dyeing. "it was turning balkc. "I love you seh said as she did. ((This is the most anti-climatic death ever))

AND THEN STARGLEAM WAS DIED!11!111!11111!1!11! ((Finally, now I only have to kill the author(Again, I'm not actually going to do this))

And yes I'm aware of the fact that there are more chapters to come. Let's just enjoy this now.