I found out that I was supposed to write four paragraphs, not five. (The rubric told us that we were to have five paragraphs, though..)

Well, there goes one full paragraph that took me two days to complete...

Ah well. I was going to discard my second body paragraph as well, but then I realized that it could make do for the new first body paragraph.

I don't need to rewrite the whole paragraph again, then!

Bohahahahaha!!

(That's addicting to say, Rukia's got me)