@astrxly
username: 9/10
lovely how it plays into your theme. one note, I personally am not a fan of replacing letters with an 'x', however that's just a stylistic choice.
display name: 10/10
punchy, bold, clear, and good at taking up space. I like it. Not too simple, but simple enough. The stars again are really fitting and a cute addition specific to your profile.
banner: 10/10
these stars are tranquil in there appearance on your profile and are really effective as a banner because they don't clash with anything. they also play into your theme well.
profile picture: 6/10
i'm just not enjoying the line drawing here. despite weaving into your theme well, it is very bad quality even when small, has poor composition and is just too bland for me.
bio: 9/10
sweet, short and clear. a perfectly formatted introduction to your profile. 'whom' seems a bit like a stylistic misstep - it is perfectly okay to use but it seems unusual on context with such casual and colloquial language.
books:8/10
It's quite pleasing how you have continued the monochrome space theme without, and it shows a real dedication to your profile. I love the little doodles and handwritten-like font for your titles. the covers do seem a little boring, and I'll tell you that they did not catch my attention or intrigue me at all, but that is a sacrifice you have to make for dedicating yourself to a theme as minimalist and monochrome as this.
reading lists: 9/10
I love the simplicity of the first list, and it ties into your theme. the second list, however, seems messy, the symbols are clumped together and seem to have no correlation. maybe just clean this up.
overall theme: 9/10
you have successfully constructed and stayed true to your space theme. However, personally, I find it a little too restrictive and common - so many profiles are about space. I just want to see some creativity - you seem to be relying on your them for everything, even your location. Your profile could really shine with a little uniqueness - you certainly have the eye for making a good profile, now adapt it to make it a little more out of the ordinary.
Overall score: 70/80
★✦☾
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