Icy-temper

I thought your cover was unique and original even if it was pretty gruesome. I thought your summary was a bit too long for a one-shot and gave too much information away but was well written. Spelling and grammar were excellent, there were no flaws from what I could tell. You did an excellent job of describing the scenes and the characters. I'll admit this story took me by surprise. I was expecting sort of a horror/slasher vibe but this was so different. You took me into a post-apocalyptic world with the main character struggling to survive by his medical knowledge and made it clear he had been doing so for years. You gave him a relatable personality and I really liked him. What's more, you were able to create a relationship for him in the hellish world, complete with his partner, Matt, being the one bold enough to place Santa hats on the zombies. The whole vibe of the story was unique and cool and totally unexpected. I really enjoyed reading this. I think you should branch this out and make it into a full-length novel.