missmarswrites

Your cover is cute and Christmasy but I wish it had a bit more detail that matched your plot instead of just a color. Your summary was perfect other than the question. You could do without that part. You had a few grammar and tense issues, not too bad and I wasn't that distracted but they were still noticeable. I thought this story was cute. The way her little girl asked her to tell her the story of how she met her dad and the memory that followed. I liked how cute Wyatt was with her and his apology but I would have liked a tad more history between them before you broke off back into reality. It was a sweet, feel-good moment story that was perfect for the holiday season. Nice job!