tidwell56

Your cover flows well with the bitter cold elements of the character's journey. The summary is simple, a one-liner, but you made it intriguing and that's so important. Very well done. Spelling and Grammar were astoundingly well done, so professional and an example to all writers on Wattpad. Your description was spot on. I could feel the chill in the air, the staleness of the nursing home and the nonchalant attitude of the employees. I was able to understand Gertrude's emotions and early on I thought she was some kind of crazy old bag lady. The way you wrote revealed the plot slowly. I knew she was on a journey and figured she was going to visit a sick relative once she arrived at the nursing home, but there was the sweetest twist on this in the end. This story was so endearing and I think it gives us hope that even when all seems lost there is always a guiding light watching out for us. This was beautifully written! I just loved it! I see you write sci-fi but you should write more stories like this or even romance!