moonyagami

Your cover was okay. It didn't say much as far as plot. I assumed this was a fan fiction from the beginning but you never said what fandom with was from. There was NO summary at all, which was definitely a turn off for me. I found a lot of spelling and grammar errors here and lots of commas where it made no sense to have them. I had a hard time figuring out what this story was about. It seemed to be about a BTS character performing but I couldn't be sure. The story didn't seem to have a structure to it which threw me off and I couldn't seem to get involved in the plot at all. You do have a clear writing style. Nice effort! Next time be sure to have a summary!