A/N: I have officially rewritten the first chapter of A Snake's Heart. It is still taking place in the Kim Possible world, with changes from the original version to improve the storyline then had it was written before.  I hope you enjoy the new rewritten version.

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It was a rainy and stormy afternoon in Otogakure. Two figures were standing inside a dimly lit lab standing in front of a test tube with a figure inside of the green liquid.

The first figure was a  tall, very pale skin man with golden eyes with slitted pupils, purple markings around his eyes, and fang-like teeth. He also has pronounced cheekbones and straight waist-length black hair with some locks covering and framing his face or his shoulders.

The man was known as Orochimaru the Snake Sannin and leader of Otogakure. While the other person was his right-hand man named, Kabuto.

Kabuto is a fair-skinned man in his 20s with onyx eyes and ash-grey hair, which he wears in a ponytail. He wears black-rimmed circular glasses.

They were currently working on their latest experiment after finishing training with Sasuke Uchiha, who joined them a couple of months ago now.

"Soon, I will create the ability for shinobi to manipulate time and space," Orochimaru said, watching the liquid fill up the tube.

"So, how exactly is this supposed to work?" Kabuto asked.

The sound of booming thunder could be heard outside of the hideout as Orochimaru spoke.

"You heard of the Rinnegan, right Kabuto?" Orochimaru sated.

"Yes, it said that the Sage of Six paths has it," Kabuto said.

"Correct, it's a belief that the Rinnegan can manipulate space and open dimensions. So the liquid was a mixture of what I could gather to create a similar power to the Rinnegan," Orochimaru explained.

Suddenly a flash and boom were heard from the storm as lighting struck the test tube, making it glow slightly.

"My Lord, back away!" Kabuto shouted, pulling Orochimaru away from the tube as it broke.

The next moment the figure inside opened its eyes, seeing strange blue eyes that glowed as swirling blinding light lit up the lab.

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-Dr. Drakken's secret Lair-

"You'll see Shrgo! My nano tick plan might not have worked, but my next plan will definitely work!" A blue skin toned man with a scar near his nose and a mullet-type hairstyle wearing a blue lab coat yelled with enthusiasm.

A woman in her late 20s with a slight green skin tone groaned as she listened to her bosses' ranting for the hundredth time. She had long black hair and dark green eyes as she wore a green and black catsuit that showed off her hourglass figure incredibly. The suit oddly hid her large D breasts since it pressed them down. Her waist was slim, and her bottom was in good proportion giving her a bombshell figure, even with her breasts hidden for the most part.

She sighed as she looked on up at her employer."Sure, Dr. D, I heard you say that for the hundredth time," She said as she pulled out her nail file to sharpen the claws on her gloves.

She then stood up and was about to leave the room to get a glass of water when suddenly there was a bright flash of blue, and two shadows of people could be made out falling on the floor.

"Ugh," A teenage voice groaned."My body feels so sore from whatever just happened."

The light fades away to reveal a younger Orochimaru and a teenage Kabuto. Orochimaru seemed to be around his 20s and had slightly shorter black hair. He was wearing a purple kimono, blue sweatpants, and black sandals. Kabuto appears to be fifteen years old. He wore a black turtleneck shirt, grey cropped pants, and blue sandals.

Kabuto looked up and spotted Shego and Dr. Drakken on the other side of the room. "Oh, hello there. Do you, by chance, know where we are?" He asked, confused.

"Who are you two? And for your information, you are in the lair of Dr. Drakken!" Drakken stated, pointing at Orochimaru and Kabuto.

"Right, we haven't introduced ourselves," Kabuto said."I'm Kabuto Yakushi, and this is Lord Orochimaru," He said with Orochimaru's arm around his shoulder."We don't know how we got here. The last thing we recall is lighting hitting the lab and then a flash of light from a test experiment sending us here," Kabuto explained, looking around the lair.

"So then you're some kind of Lord, and this boy is your servant Shego said with a raised eyebrow."I don't see the Lord. You don't seem that much older than me," She said with a glare at Orochimaru.

"Yes, I'm the Lord of my own village, and as for why I was made younger as I was sent here, I don't know, and you don't need to know either," Orochimaru said with a glare of his own at Shego.

"Anyway, who are you two?" Kabuto asked.

"I am the great Dr. Drakken! The man who will take over the world!" Dr. Drakken exclaimed, making Orochimaru and Kabuto glance at him with an eyebrow raised.

Orochimaru then chuckled loudly, holding his stomach as he removed his arm away from Kabuto's shoulder. She glanced at Orochimaru hearing his laugh, and couldn't help but stare at him in confusion.

'That laugh is so sinister and creepy definitely has Dr. D's laugh beat, but what is he laughing for.' She thought, watching the way his chest moved as he laughed.

"What's so funny?" Dr.Drakjen asked.

"The fact an idiot like you believes that he can take over the world. You don't have the power to do so," Orochimaru said with a smirk.

"Hey, I'm not an idiot, you snake eye creep!" Draken shouted.

Orochimaru stopped laughing and quickly summoned a large brown snake from his sleeve and wrapped it around Drakkrn, lifting him up."You say something again about my eyes or appearance, and I kill you right here!" He said, releasing a killing intent making Drakken shiver in fear at the powerful aura.

"Hey, knock it off and chill. Dr. D doesn't know what he is talking about. Your eyes rock," Shego said, igniting green flames from her hands."More importantly, where did the snake come from?" She asked.

"A technique is known in my family. Now, who are you?" He asked, looking at her, not letting Dr.Drakken go.

'What kind of family makes snakes come out their sleeves? Where exactly are these two from?' She thought, confused, shaking her head and deciding it didn't matter.

"I'm Shego, and the blue doofus hired me to protect him and steal for him," She explained and kept her hands ignited."So calm down, or I have to force you to let him go!"

Orochimaru just looked at her before dismissing his snake, making Dr.Draskken fall onto the ground. He sighed and felt Kabuto place a hand on his shoulder, calming him down.

"Fine, he gets to live, but one more comment from him about my snake features, he's dead. So be warned, I will attack you too if you interfere with me!"

Shego grew a tick mark at his comment, thinking he could beat her easily. She glared at him as she launched a ball of plasma at the Orochimaru, only for him to catch it and mold it around his hand using charka. "Hm, strong fire element indeed, but not strong enough." He said; a ball of water from his hand engulfed her plasma.

"W-What are you?" Drakken asked in a terrified tone.

"I'm a ninja from a land where they could use charka to control the elements, and this boy Kabuto is my right-hand man. That is the only thing you need to know." He explained as he relaxed in a chair. He raised an eyebrow as he looked at Shego. "Shego, is that your real name?" He asked curiously.

"All you need to know is call me Shego!" She said with a glare and growl.

He chuckles in amusement as he shakes his head.

"That's fine by me. We all have things we like to keep to ourselves. I'm not going to pry into your personal business. Since we're stuck here and don't know how to get back home yet, it seems we will be staying here with you two. We're not going to interfere with your plans." He said with a grin, and something about it told Shego he wouldn't leave anytime soon.

"Whatever, just stay out of my way." She said as she glared at him before looking away, seeing he wasn't affected by her glare.

"I have been in two wars, fought a massive salamander with poison, hundreds to thousands of people. I'm pretty sure I can hold my own, now don't get upset; I'm impressed with the tough front you mask, but you haven't seen war like me, so that look doesn't affect me." He said with a chuckle before walking down the hall with Kabuto.

"Shego, keep an eye on that man. I might be able to use him somehow. The kid I doubt will be much use, so don't bother with him." Drakken said, making her turn her glare on him.

Shego sighed but nodded as she followed Orochimaru. She had a strong feeling he was going to be a  significant pain.

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Hello, my wonderful readers and followers. I finally finished rewriting chapter 1 of A Snake's Heart. Shego and Orochimaru will still be paired together, but I plan on developing the relationship better than I did in the original version. I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Let me know what you think about this chapter in the comments.

Thanks for reading!

Q: What did you think of rewriting the first chapter?

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