Hallo!:) It has been so long since i've read this story!:) For me(in my opinion) this story was not great. My spelling and everything actually doesn't make sense. I think i was 10 when i did this. But now i'm 12😂 you guys should now my real age. I'm 12. Anyways, for me this story was not successful. I can not believe it that you guys even commented "Great Chapter" or "good story" etc. Thank you. But i truly believe that my work is stupid. Should i delete this story? should i delete this story then make a story similar to this and make upgrades? Should i just leave it like this? Please comment!:) i do want your opinions so please comment. You can even put that this story was not good. I want to hear your opinions!:) please comment. Thank you!:)